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Date written: 07/26/2025
eye am... an eel s i m n w m i g... in your honey-sweet saliva and you... a ballerina r l i i w n t g with abandon on my tongue.

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Date: 7/31/2025 6:29:00 AM
Congrats. This is very cleverly done. When I kissed my first boyfriend. I was disappointed when he took it to tongue. I guess I am just weird. The other way was just so perfect
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Date: 7/28/2025 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2025 8:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 7/28/2025 6:34:00 AM
Wow! Very sensual! ooh la la
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2025 8:23:00 AM
Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Kim:-)
Date: 7/28/2025 2:52:00 AM
Nice one, Edward. Congratulations on your top win! Stay creative! ^___^ JCB
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/28/2025 8:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, JCB:-)

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