Edward Ibeh Poet Imagism

Notes About The Poem

Date written: 07/26/2025

French Kiss

eye am...
              an eel
s       i         m         n
   w       m         i         g...
in your honey-sweet saliva 

and you...
             a ballerina 
                                r     l
                            i              i
                            w          n
                                 t   g                       
       with abandon 
                    on my tongue.

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Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2025 at 6:29 AM Congrats. This is very cleverly done. When I kissed my first boyfriend. I was disappointed when he took it to tongue. I guess I am just weird. The other way was just so perfect

Sara Kendrick July 28, 2025 at 1:27 PM Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K Edward Ibeh July 28, 2025 at 8:35 PM Thank you very much, Sara:-)

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2025 at 6:34 AM Wow! Very sensual! ooh la la Edward Ibeh July 28, 2025 at 8:23 AM Thank you very much for the lovely visit, Kim:-)

JC Brul July 28, 2025 at 2:52 AM Nice one, Edward. Congratulations on your top win! Stay creative! ^___^ JCB Edward Ibeh July 28, 2025 at 8:24 AM Thank you very much, JCB:-)