Foreboding

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foreboding omen bumblebees on the decline the worse yet to come AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/26/2025 5:48:00 AM

yes, sadly - thoughtful write, my friend

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2025 7:32:00 AM

Hi Jack ~ yes, the signs are there ~

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 6:01:00 PM

Thanks for sharing you fine Haikus with us, Line. Bill

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/26/2025 7:32:00 AM

Much appreciated, thanks Bill.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 5:03:00 PM

sad and foreboding...I agree. For many years our yard was full of butterflies and bees, especially in the summer. I've yet to see either one.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/25/2025 7:18:00 PM

That's so sad ~ so true that butterflies are scarce too.