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Foreboding

foreboding omen
bumblebees on the decline
the worse yet to come



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Horne Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 5:48 AM
yes, sadly - thoughtful write, my friend
Gauthier Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Hi Jack ~ yes, the signs are there ~
Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Thanks for sharing you fine Haikus with us, Line. Bill
Gauthier Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Much appreciated, thanks Bill.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 5:03 PM
sad and foreboding...I agree. For many years our yard was full of butterflies and bees, especially in the summer. I've yet to see either one.
Gauthier Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 7:18 PM
That's so sad ~ so true that butterflies are scarce too.
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