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Field With Petals Strewn

relaxing in the jacuzzi 
remembering when passion ran free,

big smiles lit up her face as she recalled,
the last time they had laid down...
in a field far away

was a long time ago
they whispered "I love you".
kissed goodbye, was time to go
destiny deemed pastures anew

time past ..now alone
grandparents both...children grown
people will be shocked
by the re-kindled love...in
poppy field with petals strewn

penned 3/4/2018

contest....It's all about four..Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/1/2018 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful verse and great imagery , Seren, {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:49:00 AM
Seren, CONGRATULATION on your win in my contest with this lovely and dreamy poem, well done!
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:48:00 AM
Very enjoyable and touching write Seren. The body fades but the passion remains.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:30:00 AM
Lovely poem, Seren. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this delightful poem! A pleasure to read. Well done.
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