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Hi poets, I'm so slow in thinking about what poem to write. I'm into this sharing the Word of Eternal God. I forgot how to write my personal poetry. I have this good friend named Bernard F. Asuncion, I'm getting ideas with the help of his poetry titles and asked if he can be my editor because I wrote a book but I need an editor, please pray that Mr. Bernard accept my question. I don't know I think I'll comment on some other poetrysoup members to regain my knowledge of poetry.

We don’t see how it gives us power
Like an air
Can’t see it
But we feel it

It is like Eternal God
Gives its power
Power for electricity
Gives us light

Eternal God gives us light
Light of Understanding
Why the outcome is like that
Answer can be right or wrong

We choose our path
Path is our decision

Poetry Form: Sonnet
Date Written May 25, 2025
Time Written 8:35pm PST

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David Crandall

Date: 5/26/2025 3:17:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem. Have fun writing!