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Hi poets, I'm so slow in thinking about what poem to write. I'm into this sharing the Word of Eternal God. I forgot how to write my personal poetry. I have this good friend named Bernard F. Asuncion, I'm getting ideas with the help of his poetry titles and asked if he can be my editor because I wrote a book but I need an editor, please pray that Mr. Bernard accept my question. I don't know I think I'll comment on some other poetrysoup members to regain my knowledge of poetry.

We don’t see how it gives us power Like an air Can’t see it But we feel it It is like Eternal God Gives its power Power for electricity Gives us light Eternal God gives us light Light of Understanding Why the outcome is like that Answer can be right or wrong We choose our path Path is our decision Poetry Form: Sonnet Date Written May 25, 2025 Time Written 8:35pm PST

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David Crandall

Date: 5/26/2025 3:17:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem. Have fun writing!