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Dear Darling,

It was the time the day the wanting 
 
The feeling I get when I see your note
 
The tingling that flows to my toes
 
The waiting, loving, hoping
 
Holding the others heart
 
Seems to tear apart
 
The incredible life within
 
The kisses within seems to touch
 
The scattered thoughts
 
And disappeared into the night
 
Until I see your wonderful face one more time...
 
You see darling, its you
 
It has been you all the time
 
The feeling of loneliness I feel
 
Until you appear
 
Dear Darling, its me and you
 
As long as you want it to be..
 
Dear Darling....

Brooke Dylan 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/14/2014 5:40:00 AM
Hi Brooke, I have to ask...did you realize you spelled your name wrong at the end of the poem?
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/14/2014 6:22:00 AM
lol.... no I didnt.. thank you .. I will fix it..
Date: 5/12/2014 12:06:00 PM
Hi Brooke.. oh what a sensual write you created here.. !!! I can feel the longing, your desire that burning... well done!! :O))
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/12/2014 12:08:00 PM
thankyou so much dear one hugs

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