Get Your Premium Membership

Dear Darling,

It was the time the day the wanting The feeling I get when I see your note The tingling that flows to my toes The waiting, loving, hoping Holding the others heart Seems to tear apart The incredible life within The kisses within seems to touch The scattered thoughts And disappeared into the night Until I see your wonderful face one more time... You see darling, its you It has been you all the time The feeling of loneliness I feel Until you appear Dear Darling, its me and you As long as you want it to be.. Dear Darling.... Brooke Dylan 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/14/2014 5:40:00 AM
Hi Brooke, I have to ask...did you realize you spelled your name wrong at the end of the poem?
Login to Reply
Dylan Avatar
Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/14/2014 6:22:00 AM
lol.... no I didnt.. thank you .. I will fix it..
Date: 5/12/2014 12:06:00 PM
Hi Brooke.. oh what a sensual write you created here.. !!! I can feel the longing, your desire that burning... well done!! :O))
Login to Reply
Dylan Avatar
Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/12/2014 12:08:00 PM
thankyou so much dear one hugs

Book: Shattered Sighs