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Counterbalancing Self

Counterbalancing Self


I found her in absent withdrawal
A study of confusion and nerves
Countermanding the calm exterior
Presented to face the day

Hand applied radiance 
Giving her face a glow
While the eyes struggled
To balance minds overflow

I heard her in a sing song voice
greeting others beginning their day
Years of tutelage shoving forward
Presented to face the day

The rhythm a mishmash
Of blues and skipped beats
While feet moved ever forward
Sturdy, ever denying defeat.

I saw her in bits and pieces
When I, myself, had hit a wall
Mirrored glances chased my vision
Presented to face the day

I watched her stumble
Yet never quite fall
And wished for her balance
So I, too, could stand tall
 
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading. God bless you
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Debra Squyres
Date: 9/29/2019 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Regina..
Date: 9/28/2019 8:20:00 PM
I see you as a balanced person. I enjoyed this thoughtful piece. Hugs Rick.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 9/29/2019 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Rick
Date: 9/28/2019 1:33:00 PM
I enjoyed the read...Well done
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Debra Squyres
Date: 9/29/2019 10:03:00 AM
Thank you :)

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