Counterbalancing Self

Counterbalancing Self


I found her in absent withdrawal
A study of confusion and nerves
Countermanding the calm exterior
Presented to face the day

Hand applied radiance 
Giving her face a glow
While the eyes struggled
To balance minds overflow

I heard her in a sing song voice
greeting others beginning their day
Years of tutelage shoving forward
Presented to face the day

The rhythm a mishmash
Of blues and skipped beats
While feet moved ever forward
Sturdy, ever denying defeat.

I saw her in bits and pieces
When I, myself, had hit a wall
Mirrored glances chased my vision
Presented to face the day

I watched her stumble
Yet never quite fall
And wished for her balance
So I, too, could stand tall
 
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Mcintosh Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 12:08 AM
Enjoyed reading. God bless you
Squyres Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Regina..
Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 8:20 PM
I see you as a balanced person. I enjoyed this thoughtful piece. Hugs Rick.
Squyres Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Thank you, Rick
Michael Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 1:33 PM
I enjoyed the read...Well done
Squyres Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 10:03 AM
Thank you :)
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