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Atlantis

Unlike a sunken ship at sea.
Legend speaks the lost tales of 
Atlantis
Supernatural, voices from the deep,
Devil's triangle

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I wrote this purely on my gut feeling
based on the expression of an 
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like a drunk asleep at a party.
Ancient
Greek — the language seemed to be
made for Sapphics,
not a worry; anyone used to English
finds it a bastard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/3/2013 12:26:00 PM
a unique rendition so finely done, danesh... you picked an intruiging subject; inviting!..:) huggs
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/3/2013 4:46:00 PM
nette thank you for your sweet words
Date: 9/3/2013 6:07:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your Sapphic Stanza..Unique lines..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/3/2013 4:45:00 PM
thank you so much Sara.
Date: 9/2/2013 9:34:00 PM
I find this very enjoyable, Danesh...anything on Atlantis intrigues me.. Thanks for visiting and leaving a comment on "Place of Acceptance". Always, Annalise
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/2/2013 9:34:00 PM
mystic it is hidden from me what you can see. . . thanks
Date: 9/2/2013 7:16:00 PM
I applaud your gifted talents. I am so drawn to the legend of Atlantis. I almost titled a poem Atlantis because I actually grew on a street named Atlantis Drive... I will be reading a few more of your very inspiring poems. :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/2/2013 9:38:00 PM
I am more clueless to Atlantis than the Bermuda triangle. . . thou they are saying its related. . this just pop into my head. .had no vision or idea when composing it. . . lols thank again Karen
Date: 8/31/2013 5:17:00 PM
I enjoy poems that speak of the legend of Atlantis. You are so right about Sapphics. They are NOT made for English speakers!! I had quite a struggle doing mine!
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/31/2013 8:34:00 PM
Andrea you are too kind thanks
Date: 8/31/2013 9:23:00 AM
- A well done poem, exciting theme Danesh! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 8/31/2013 9:43:00 AM
Anne hope so. . .thank you so much

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