Danesh Morgan Poet Sapphic stanza

Atlantis

Unlike a sunken ship at sea.
Legend speaks the lost tales of 
Atlantis
Supernatural, voices from the deep,
Devil's triangle

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I wrote this purely on my gut feeling
based on the expression of an 
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like a drunk asleep at a party.
Ancient
Greek — the language seemed to be
made for Sapphics,
not a worry; anyone used to English
finds it a bastard.

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Nette Onclaud September 3, 2013 at 12:26 PM a unique rendition so finely done, danesh... you picked an intruiging subject; inviting!..:) huggs Danesh Morgan September 3, 2013 at 4:46 PM nette thank you for your sweet words

Sara Kendrick September 3, 2013 at 6:07 AM Enjoyed reading your Sapphic Stanza..Unique lines..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Danesh Morgan September 3, 2013 at 4:45 PM thank you so much Sara.

Audrey Haick September 2, 2013 at 9:34 PM I find this very enjoyable, Danesh...anything on Atlantis intrigues me.. Thanks for visiting and leaving a comment on "Place of Acceptance". Always, Annalise Danesh Morgan September 2, 2013 at 9:34 PM mystic it is hidden from me what you can see. . . thanks

Karen Anglesey September 2, 2013 at 7:16 PM I applaud your gifted talents. I am so drawn to the legend of Atlantis. I almost titled a poem Atlantis because I actually grew on a street named Atlantis Drive... I will be reading a few more of your very inspiring poems. :) Danesh Morgan September 2, 2013 at 9:38 PM I am more clueless to Atlantis than the Bermuda triangle. . . thou they are saying its related. . this just pop into my head. .had no vision or idea when composing it. . . lols thank again Karen

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2013 at 5:17 PM I enjoy poems that speak of the legend of Atlantis. You are so right about Sapphics. They are NOT made for English speakers!! I had quite a struggle doing mine! Danesh Morgan August 31, 2013 at 8:34 PM Andrea you are too kind thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2013 at 9:23 AM - A well done poem, exciting theme Danesh! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Danesh Morgan August 31, 2013 at 9:43 AM Anne hope so. . .thank you so much