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A Season For Us

like its own vibrant season
there is a time for us
in-between spring and summer
we blossom and grow

like the evening star dancing around the moon
our laughter carries us upon its song
melodies of light and love

like a bee to its flower
i am drawn home to you
as the other seasons fade away
ours glows with passion

where we blossom and grow
in-between spring and summer
there is a time for us like its own vibrant season

1st place  A Time For Us contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/27/2020 9:09:00 AM
Jeanne thank-you for answering with some beautiful comments on some of my poems I see this one won and very deservedly so - congratulations. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
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Date: 8/27/2020 8:10:00 AM
Buzz! Adorable! Congratulations, Jeanne. Hope your every holiday moment is bright as poetry.
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:12:00 AM
A lovely poem! Crisp and vibrant like the season. I like the economy of words used that speak a lot. Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 8/18/2020 8:46:00 PM
Very nicely said, Jeanne; everyone needs a special time and place for themselves and loved ones.
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Date: 8/16/2020 2:05:00 PM
Beautiful Jeanne. So nice :)
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Date: 8/16/2020 12:21:00 PM
A lovely little sweet write Jeanne, such a seasonal write indeed. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 8/16/2020 11:48:00 AM
How sweet and romantic--a lovely write, Jeanne.
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