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A Passing Glance

The other day
as I turned the corner
onto my quiet street

I saw a woman so perfect
she snatched my breath away
as she waited to cross the road.

It was like seeing a movie star
or a beauty queen up close--
my heart ached a bit, I confess,
when I thought, once, a long, 
long time ago, I just might 
have had a chance....

But now I'm just an old man
driving an old car to an old house.
I drove slowly and could see
her gracefully crossing the street
in my rear-view mirror, much
like a dream fading quickly away...
suddenly, from somewhere far
beyond my mind, I realized 
the truth of what I saw: that
it was all stupid illusion--
she  was young and beautiful,
I, old and lame, but those were 
just markers on the wheel of time.

The wheel would turn,
my body would die, hers would age,
no longer enrapturing men: in a way,
she was already an old woman which
I could not see, nor could I see the
sweet child still playing within her.

When there are no more days left,
our souls will be free of the Wheel
and all the world's illusions will
seem as distant, fading dreams....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/26/2021 11:58:00 AM
Yes! I too often think that life is but a dream.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/27/2021 8:16:00 AM
Then you have felt your soul, too, Elaine...
Date: 12/11/2020 1:25:00 PM
Wow! great message, Nolo ~
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/27/2021 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Line--sorry I missed this before!
Date: 7/6/2020 9:43:00 PM
Inspiring expressions articulately well-said and my compliments truly for your endeavors, achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/7/2020 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, William--and aloha [never made it to Hawaii, alas!]
Date: 7/6/2020 12:37:00 PM
You always bring such profound perceptions to your poems, LJ, and this is no different. There is great wisdom in your words. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/7/2020 11:22:00 PM
Gracias!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/7/2020 12:26:00 PM
Thanks Sam-- you always make me blush! Vaya con Dios, como siempre, mi amiga
Date: 7/6/2020 10:09:00 AM
this is a deep and moving write. Very nice indeed. Congrats on your win. A fav for me.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/6/2020 12:21:00 PM
Thanks Jeanne, much appreciated!
Date: 7/6/2020 5:55:00 AM
Wow I loved this piece! No wonder it took the top win! Congrats my friend!;)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/6/2020 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, glad you liked it!
Date: 7/4/2020 12:23:00 PM
Enjoyed the depth of your thoughts dwelling in markers of time--well written, LJ.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/5/2020 12:11:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay--hope you are well in these fraught times--

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