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17.06.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Fantasy 

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France
1st place in the contest
 

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~ Day and night have doors between different realities ~ quote by poet Children are an infinite source of wonder and w h i m s y R e v e r i e has the ability to let thoughts fly a balance between illusion and reality The time from the light goes out in the evening until morning dawns The darkness is experienced dramatic and frightening The ceiling lamp transforms into an evil bat Mysterious shadows behind the curtain come alive Scary creatures, sharp teeth and magic Even under the covers he caught quick glimpses of the monster The dangers of darkness defeats of trolls and dragons Between sleep and wakefulness a h a l l u c i n a t i o n A d r e a m can play tricks on us camouflages itself as a chameleon V i s u a l i z a t i o n may not have the words to express feelings but awakens the child's curiosity and challenges the i m a g i n a t i o n When the sun hits the window pane in the morning (with eyes of fear) ... scary trolls, doubtful in daylight

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Date: 7/21/2025 1:30:00 PM
Anne-Lise, I see you placed first and deservedly so. I do remember being scared at times when sleeping as a young child. I think children need a lot of love and reassurance. I’m uncertain as to how much fear is normal at a young age. A troll can take a toll. Smiles!!!
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Date: 6/27/2025 11:01:00 PM
Huge Congrats on your well-deserving first place win and on this stellar fantasy story write my dear poet friend, Anne-lise! So enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless. Hugs
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Date: 6/27/2025 11:50:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fantasy A Different World" write again. Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win............
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Date: 6/27/2025 10:16:00 AM
You compose and portray yourself with such great creativity, Anne-Lise! Your amazing word crafting is so vivid. This is just breathtaking! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/27/2025 9:43:00 AM
you have created wonderful visions within this masterful poem Anne - Lise. A pleasure to read this well deserved win, Congrats.
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Date: 6/26/2025 11:03:00 PM
Congratulations poet friend on your top win in Constance`s contest with a well-thought "frightening" fantasy poem. Fortunately the dawn of light dispels the fright. Sending you blessings of light.
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Date: 6/19/2025 3:04:00 AM
Quite a dark fantasy poem, dear Anne-Lise. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/18/2025 12:28:00 PM
Nicely expressed! Funny how even as a grownup, then awful things come out at night and disappear in the morning!
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Date: 6/18/2025 9:33:00 AM
Nice poem. One of your best.
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Date: 6/18/2025 9:12:00 AM
Scary shadows rule the night. Very nicely written Anne, best wishes
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Date: 6/18/2025 4:20:00 AM
Oh, so good. Love this. God bless you, sweet friend. love, Gina
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Date: 6/17/2025 4:49:00 PM
Deep, Anne-Lise. I really loved the ending" eyes of fear" "doubtful in daylight"
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Date: 6/17/2025 4:02:00 PM
Loved your poem...doesn't seem like fantasy to me but perhaps more of a surreal reality. Nonetheless, you've crafted a genius of a poem! Faving. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, yellow rose
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Date: 6/17/2025 12:52:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fantasy A Different World" write. What a great picture and quote you have here. Scary creatures do Not like the sunlight, so be gone. Hooray!!! "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away..........
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Date: 6/17/2025 12:52:00 PM
You’ve woven a great poem! Kids are braver in the sunlight, but still they work things out in their dreams …imagine, create, become courageous…
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