Yellow A Breathless Color

"Yellow is a bright and fun color to enjoy." By Poet
Yellow is my husband's favorite color, my fun surprise was going to cost more than a dollar. We were dating and he was coming to see me, I was dressing in all yellow looking like a big bee. When he got off the airplane, he said - you look breathless not like a plain Jane. I knew I was not going to flee, as he got down on one knee.
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Date: 5/31/2025 8:07:00 PM
You were the 'sunny' part of his life. This poem made me smile Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/3/2025 1:07:00 PM
Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Glad my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write made you smile. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" They are free so give them away. Have A Happy Day Writing Away.........
Date: 5/27/2025 12:50:00 PM
"2 Place" Yellow A Breathless Color~ Date Written:5/24/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.... ~ True Story ~
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Date: 5/27/2025 4:36:00 AM
- Back with a congratulation, Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:49:00 PM
Great to see you back here again. Hooray!!! Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thank You for your Congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. It was fun to write. I would never do that now. Hugs.... Have A Happy Day Writing Away........
Date: 5/26/2025 6:03:00 AM
Paula reading this poem made me happy. The brightness of yellow is uplifting and the proposal was just lovely. Good luck in the contest. It deserves to do very well.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:46:00 PM
Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your Good luck in the contest. I wish you were not turned off. I would like to write to you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Day Writing Away........
Date: 5/25/2025 9:06:00 PM
Wow. i tried yellow once with a girlfriend. I dressed up as a banana. I guess I wasn't very 'appealing.' Nyuk, nyuk. ~ gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:44:00 PM
You always make me laugh. Thanks for this laugh. I needed it. I am not sure if I was a lemon or a banana. Hahaha!!! Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Day Writing Away........
Date: 5/25/2025 10:58:00 AM
You wrote a cute entry about a fellow in love with the woman wearing yellow. CayCay ~~ I had to come back and edit after reading this is a true story. I have to say, how romantic! Seems a perfect memory was made that day.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 11:09:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be, romantic. It was true and I guess romantic. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away........
Date: 5/25/2025 2:24:00 AM
- Yellow stands for emotions, wisdom, joy and positivity :) - Yellow reminds us of sun and warmth ... he met a warm woman who he wanted to share his life with ... lovely poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 8:22:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be a, lovely poem. I only knew about the sun. I did not know about the yellow color standing for all these things. Thanks for telling me. Hugs.... Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away........
Date: 5/24/2025 10:28:00 PM
What a cute and tender love poem. I wish you the best in the contest. Happy weekend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 8:18:00 AM
Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your best in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be, a cute and tender love poem. It is a true story. Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away.........
Date: 5/24/2025 10:08:00 PM
Yellow A Breathless Color~ Date Written:5/24/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.... ~ True Story ~
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