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Yellow A Breathless Color

"Yellow is a bright and fun color to enjoy." By Poet Yellow is my husband's favorite color, my fun surprise was going to cost more than a dollar. We were dating and he was coming to see me, I was dressing in all yellow looking like a big bee. When he got off the airplane, he said - you look breathless not like a plain Jane. I knew I was not going to flee, as he got down on one knee.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/27/2025 12:50:00 PM

"2 Place" Yellow A Breathless Color~ Date Written:5/24/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.... ~ True Story ~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2025 4:36:00 AM

- Back with a congratulation, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:49:00 PM

Great to see you back here again. Hooray!!! Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thank You for your Congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. It was fun to write. I would never do that now. Hugs.... Have A Happy Day Writing Away........

Speaks Volumes

Date: 5/26/2025 6:03:00 AM

Paula reading this poem made me happy. The brightness of yellow is uplifting and the proposal was just lovely. Good luck in the contest. It deserves to do very well.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:46:00 PM

Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your Good luck in the contest. I wish you were not turned off. I would like to write to you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Day Writing Away........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/25/2025 9:06:00 PM

Wow. i tried yellow once with a girlfriend. I dressed up as a banana. I guess I wasn't very 'appealing.' Nyuk, nyuk. ~ gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:44:00 PM

You always make me laugh. Thanks for this laugh. I needed it. I am not sure if I was a lemon or a banana. Hahaha!!! Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Day Writing Away........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/25/2025 10:58:00 AM

You wrote a cute entry about a fellow in love with the woman wearing yellow. CayCay ~~ I had to come back and edit after reading this is a true story. I have to say, how romantic! Seems a perfect memory was made that day.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 11:09:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be, romantic. It was true and I guess romantic. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2025 2:24:00 AM

- Yellow stands for emotions, wisdom, joy and positivity :) - Yellow reminds us of sun and warmth ... he met a warm woman who he wanted to share his life with ... lovely poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 8:22:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be a, lovely poem. I only knew about the sun. I did not know about the yellow color standing for all these things. Thanks for telling me. Hugs.... Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/24/2025 10:28:00 PM

What a cute and tender love poem. I wish you the best in the contest. Happy weekend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 8:18:00 AM

Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your best in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be, a cute and tender love poem. It is a true story. Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/24/2025 10:08:00 PM

Yellow A Breathless Color~ Date Written:5/24/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.... ~ True Story ~