Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Yellow A Breathless Color

"Yellow is a bright and fun color to enjoy." By Poet

Yellow is my husband's favorite color,
my fun surprise was going to cost more than a dollar.
We were dating and he was coming to see me,
I was dressing in all yellow looking like a big bee.
When he got off the airplane,
he said - you look breathless not like a plain Jane.
I knew I was not going to flee,
as he got down on one knee.

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Marikate Kingston May 31, 2025 at 8:07 PM You were the 'sunny' part of his life. This poem made me smile Paula Paula Goldsmith June 3, 2025 at 1:07 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Glad my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write made you smile. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" They are free so give them away. Have A Happy Day Writing Away.........

Paula Goldsmith May 27, 2025 at 12:50 PM "2 Place" Yellow A Breathless Color~ Date Written:5/24/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.... ~ True Story ~

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2025 at 4:36 AM - Back with a congratulation, Paula :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith May 27, 2025 at 12:49 PM Great to see you back here again. Hooray!!! Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thank You for your Congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. It was fun to write. I would never do that now. Hugs.... Have A Happy Day Writing Away........

Speaks Volumes May 26, 2025 at 6:03 AM Paula reading this poem made me happy. The brightness of yellow is uplifting and the proposal was just lovely. Good luck in the contest. It deserves to do very well. Paula Goldsmith May 27, 2025 at 12:46 PM Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your Good luck in the contest. I wish you were not turned off. I would like to write to you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Day Writing Away........

Gershon Wolf May 25, 2025 at 9:06 PM Wow. i tried yellow once with a girlfriend. I dressed up as a banana. I guess I wasn't very 'appealing.' Nyuk, nyuk. ~ gw Paula Goldsmith May 27, 2025 at 12:44 PM You always make me laugh. Thanks for this laugh. I needed it. I am not sure if I was a lemon or a banana. Hahaha!!! Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" write. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Day Writing Away........

CayCay Godwin May 25, 2025 at 10:58 AM You wrote a cute entry about a fellow in love with the woman wearing yellow. CayCay ~~ I had to come back and edit after reading this is a true story. I have to say, how romantic! Seems a perfect memory was made that day. Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2025 at 11:09 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be, romantic. It was true and I guess romantic. I would never do that now. Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away........

Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2025 at 2:24 AM - Yellow stands for emotions, wisdom, joy and positivity :) - Yellow reminds us of sun and warmth ... he met a warm woman who he wanted to share his life with ... lovely poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2025 at 8:22 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be a, lovely poem. I only knew about the sun. I did not know about the yellow color standing for all these things. Thanks for telling me. Hugs.... Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away........

Victor Buhagiar May 24, 2025 at 10:28 PM What a cute and tender love poem. I wish you the best in the contest. Happy weekend. Paula Goldsmith May 25, 2025 at 8:18 AM Great to see you here. Thank You for your support in reading and writing. Also thanks for your best in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Yellow A Breathless Color" to be, a cute and tender love poem. It is a true story. Have A Happy Weekend Writing Away.........

Paula Goldsmith May 24, 2025 at 10:08 PM Yellow A Breathless Color~ Date Written:5/24/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.... ~ True Story ~