Whispers of the Wyrm

Written: July 18, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Tom Woody 

 Walking around the edge of a massive crater that seemed to beckon her with all sorts of bizarre things, Alice—now an adult but still not quite—felt a strong pull. She still had an insatiable need to travel, even if it had been a long time since she had done things such as dancing with white rabbits or drinking morning tea. She discovered a mirror encircled by shimmering stardust while searching the enigmatic Moonrock for indications of madness.
  
 The mirror flickered and changed, as a beauteous glass serpent, opening doors to wormholes from another galaxy.  She touched its surface with her fingertips, but they went right through it like it was liquid light. The aromas of cardamom oil and starlight were so powerful that they flooded her whole body. It was an amalgam that savored such as the core of time. Her body parts swayed and twirled bizarrely, as she was in an intense nightmare. The nebulae above laughed with joy as they opened up. Comets spun around a celestial chessboard, making a symphony of clicks that echoed through the universe.

 Alice traveled through planets ruled by quantum queens. Their eyes were as deep as black holes, and their lips formed the language of math. A drink infused with the essence of auburn was handed to her, while another crafted melody defied convention and pushed boundaries. The atmosphere in the room was warm and inviting, reminiscent of an expanded Wonderland, now adorned with an enchanting layer of twinkling stars. 
She met a dark matter cat along the way. Its smile had the power to break apart galaxies. "Tell me," Alice asked as she drank the delicious essence of entropy, "is this a memory or a wonder?"

 The cat looked back with knowing eyes and said, "Both." We never truly depart; we only shift.

spacetime came apart
curiosity sewed string~
mirrors still call out
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Date: 8/7/2025 5:38:00 PM
Excellent write Sweet Sotto - the best for me was the dark matter cat breaking apart galaxies - such powerful energy dark matter is especially when we find some on Earth & in poems.
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Date: 8/7/2025 4:37:00 PM
A spicy powerful portrait of cosmic thrills, I too chose the haibun for this August contest. Congratulations on your placement, S P! __Anaya
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Date: 8/7/2025 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations dear poet with your win in this contest with a form to tit the outer space, calling for imagination. Wishing you a thrilling day.
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Date: 8/7/2025 10:36:00 AM
I would never have guessed this was you as it's a far cry from your usual style. What sold me on this was the raw intellectualism. Carl Sagan could have written it. Nice
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/7/2025 11:17:00 AM
Yessir!
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Sotto Poet
Date: 8/7/2025 11:11:00 AM
Tom, appreciate so much your hosting this contest, and thanks for your great comment and my wonderful placement in your contest.
Date: 7/24/2025 4:00:00 AM
Must be a contest going on because I have seen maybe two similar ones. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 7/21/2025 12:40:00 PM
SP, I love how you intertwine so many features in the universe with philosophical musings. All very fun to read. It’s an experience that feels a bit like traveling faster than light. Smiles!
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Date: 7/18/2025 11:23:00 PM
You are simply amazing, dear Lasaad ! Your imagination can take you to any mystical land. Alice's journey through space cutting across galaxies, comets and celestial bodies is indeed an escapade through a wonderland. Her meeting with the 'dark matter cat' and the delicious drink of entropy, she tasted add to the mysterious effect of the poem. Great Haibun.
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Date: 7/18/2025 5:28:00 PM
You surely wrote well for this contest. Amazing, everything, I felt almost mad reading it, lol. :) Enjoyed "spacetime came apart"
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Date: 7/18/2025 5:10:00 PM
Just wow, Sotto! Your response to the contest prompt is engaging and brilliant. You have a creative spirit that shines in this poem....best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 7/18/2025 4:55:00 PM
this is brilliant and quite touching, i immediately thought to Alice, in wonderland, great pen indeed, thanks poet
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Date: 7/18/2025 2:19:00 PM
Excellent Haibun, My friend, a FAV for my collection. This was such an intriguing and engaging poem. The story and the Haiku were mystical. It is true, life is eternal and only the different experiences are different. Death is by the pause button of the movie of life, pushed by the Creator of all that was, all that is, and all that will ever be. Blessings my brilliant poet friend. Bill
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