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I wrote this and came up with the melody for the song but I'm not a performer... the background music and vocal are not me. It's an app that can make musical demos of your song lyrics. :)<3

Until Then I Will Love You

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Verse one:
One day when all the air is gone
When the stars grow where the trees belong
I will still love you
If there comes a day when all is gray
Cause to the moon, all colors ran away
Oh I will still love you
If suddenly pigs really fly
And broken hearts don't make us cry
Don't you worry, I will still love you

Chorus:
I will love you until then, I will love you
Until the sun rises high under the sea
Until the oceans drain and nothing remains
Except eternity 
Until then I'll love you and you'll love me

Verse Two:
Sometime when even time won't exist 
And your sweet kisses I can resist
I will still love you
A time when all we know is turned upside down
When what holds it together comes unbound
I will still love you
And if you ever say goodbye,
I'll keep begging you for one more try
And even then, I will still love you

Chorus:
I will love you until then, I will love you
Until the sun rises high under the sea
Until the oceans drain and nothing remains
Except eternity 
Until then I'll love you and you'll love me

Bridge:/tag:
Perhaps when I am dead and gone
My love for you won't be as strong?
But that's the one thing I'll never believe 
You can tell me there's only dust
 where mountains once stood
Or that God is bad
 and the devil is good
But never say
There will come a day
When our love will fade away...
Cause, I will love you, even then, I will love you

Chorus:
I will love you until then, I will love you
Until the sun rises high under the sea
Until the oceans drain and nothing remains
Except eternity 
Until then I'll love you and you'll love me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 8/25/2025 1:04:00 PM
Such a beautiful, lyrical expression of love, Crystol! Exceptional images and perception. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Date: 8/24/2025 9:38:00 AM
SO catchy, Crystol. Love your song here. Excellent lyrics and music. Congrats in Rob's contest
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/24/2025 6:06:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!! Xxoo
Date: 8/23/2025 10:33:00 AM
Dear Crystol, your exceptional songwriting talents shine in this exquisite, lyrical piece. So beautifully tender yet fervent, evocative and emotive.. great melody and I especially loved "Until the oceans drain and nothing remains/Except eternity/ Until then I'll love you and you'll love me" - catchy phrases emphasize your pure expressive heart/soul baring.. amazing, memorable! Congratulations for your success in Rob's contest. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/23/2025 1:14:00 PM
So grateful for your visit and review Susan... blessings! Xo
Date: 8/22/2025 7:50:00 PM
Hi Crystal, Congratulations on your selection with this work of extraordinary depth and meaning. The poetic devices you employ are amazing. Thank you so much for your kind notification on my contest entry. Howard
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/23/2025 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Howard!! Xo
Date: 8/22/2025 1:44:00 PM
The cosmos seems to long for many songs, much like the stars that grace the darkened heavens. Congratulations on your winning placement
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/23/2025 1:13:00 PM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 8/22/2025 11:15:00 AM
I love your song. I have listened to it at least two dozen times and I am going to have fav this one. Thank you for entering this in my contest.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/22/2025 12:11:00 PM
Oh my goodness!that's awesome thank you!! Makes me soooo happy! Xo
Date: 8/15/2025 2:39:00 PM
I was excited to meet your voice but when I read 'ai', I couldn't, pardon the ways of CayCay. I LOVE the write, Crystol, it is beautiful, and I heard it as a song, too, probably a different song than you loaded, especially since I'm tone deaf, but I love music and these lyrics well work as a song. I, and maybe all poets, have longed dream of meeting a musician who wished to record my words as a song. Would be a dream come true. Truly beautiful and heart touching. I sent Soupy. Hugs - CayCay
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/22/2025 12:36:00 PM
Thanks ! Xo
Date: 8/13/2025 5:16:00 PM
elegant message and voice...I'm in awe, truly!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/14/2025 5:03:00 PM
That's so sweet ty... it's my lyrics but not my voice just FYI;) xo
Date: 8/13/2025 7:53:00 AM
Your voice is exquisite...this really is quite lovely. Enjoyed every piece of it. Simply...beautiful, Crystol. :) john p.s don't ever stop writing...the World needs as many songs as it can possibly ever have.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/13/2025 10:07:00 AM
Oh John,I hate to tell you this cause I tbibl.es the compliment lol but it's not me singing. :(... it's all my words and melody but not the singing or instruments. Thanks tho!! Xoxo
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