Notes About The Poem
I wrote this and came up with the melody for the song but I'm not a performer... the background music and vocal are not me. It's an app that can make musical demos of your song lyrics. :)<3
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Until Then I Will Love You

Verse one:
One day when all the air is gone
When the stars grow where the trees belong
I will still love you
If there comes a day when all is gray
Cause to the moon, all colors ran away
Oh I will still love you
If suddenly pigs really fly
And broken hearts don't make us cry
Don't you worry, I will still love you

Chorus:
I will love you until then, I will love you
Until the sun rises high under the sea
Until the oceans drain and nothing remains
Except eternity 
Until then I'll love you and you'll love me

Verse Two:
Sometime when even time won't exist 
And your sweet kisses I can resist
I will still love you
A time when all we know is turned upside down
When what holds it together comes unbound
I will still love you
And if you ever say goodbye,
I'll keep begging you for one more try
And even then, I will still love you

Chorus:
I will love you until then, I will love you
Until the sun rises high under the sea
Until the oceans drain and nothing remains
Except eternity 
Until then I'll love you and you'll love me

Bridge:/tag:
Perhaps when I am dead and gone
My love for you won't be as strong?
But that's the one thing I'll never believe 
You can tell me there's only dust
 where mountains once stood
Or that God is bad
 and the devil is good
But never say
There will come a day
When our love will fade away...
Cause, I will love you, even then, I will love you

Chorus:
I will love you until then, I will love you
Until the sun rises high under the sea
Until the oceans drain and nothing remains
Except eternity 
Until then I'll love you and you'll love me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kauffman Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 1:04 PM
Such a beautiful, lyrical expression of love, Crystol! Exceptional images and perception. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 9:38 AM
SO catchy, Crystol. Love your song here. Excellent lyrics and music. Congrats in Rob's contest
Woods Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Thank you Andrea!! Xxoo
Ashley Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 10:33 AM
Dear Crystol, your exceptional songwriting talents shine in this exquisite, lyrical piece. So beautifully tender yet fervent, evocative and emotive.. great melody and I especially loved "Until the oceans drain and nothing remains/Except eternity/ Until then I'll love you and you'll love me" - catchy phrases emphasize your pure expressive heart/soul baring.. amazing, memorable! Congratulations for your success in Rob's contest. Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
Woods Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 1:14 PM
So grateful for your visit and review Susan... blessings! Xo
Kerr Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Hi Crystal, Congratulations on your selection with this work of extraordinary depth and meaning. The poetic devices you employ are amazing. Thank you so much for your kind notification on my contest entry. Howard
Woods Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Thank you Howard!! Xo
Poet Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 1:44 PM
The cosmos seems to long for many songs, much like the stars that grace the darkened heavens. Congratulations on your winning placement
Woods Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 1:13 PM
Tysm! Xo
Carmack Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 11:15 AM
I love your song. I have listened to it at least two dozen times and I am going to have fav this one. Thank you for entering this in my contest.
Woods Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Oh my goodness!that's awesome thank you!! Makes me soooo happy! Xo
Godwin Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 2:39 PM
I was excited to meet your voice but when I read 'ai', I couldn't, pardon the ways of CayCay. I LOVE the write, Crystol, it is beautiful, and I heard it as a song, too, probably a different song than you loaded, especially since I'm tone deaf, but I love music and these lyrics well work as a song. I, and maybe all poets, have longed dream of meeting a musician who wished to record my words as a song. Would be a dream come true. Truly beautiful and heart touching. I sent Soupy. Hugs - CayCay
Woods Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 12:36 PM
Thanks ! Xo
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 5:16 PM
elegant message and voice...I'm in awe, truly!
Woods Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 5:03 PM
That's so sweet ty... it's my lyrics but not my voice just FYI;) xo
Fleming Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 7:53 AM
Your voice is exquisite...this really is quite lovely. Enjoyed every piece of it. Simply...beautiful, Crystol. :) john p.s don't ever stop writing...the World needs as many songs as it can possibly ever have.
Woods Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 10:07 AM
Oh John,I hate to tell you this cause I tbibl.es the compliment lol but it's not me singing. :(... it's all my words and melody but not the singing or instruments. Thanks tho!! Xoxo
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