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UnRaVeleD

Daniel Henry Rodgers

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UnRaVeleD

For Sale: Unworn Wedding Bands - Memories Sold Separately

engagementheartbreaklossweddingmonoku

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FJ Thomas

Date: 2/24/2025 8:19:00 PM

I love coming across a monoku, senryu, haiku, verse, etc... that blow my mind in such few words. I cannot help the little side smile that slowly slides up. Thoroughly enjoyed Daniel.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 2/25/2025 8:11:00 AM

Dear FJ, how enjoyable to see your note this morning and it lifted my spirit. Thank You!! Winter Blessngs, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/30/2024 3:35:00 PM

Hello Daniel, I wonder if anyone would buy the unworn wedding band. It lets my imagination ponder this thought. blessing my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/3/2024 11:08:00 AM

Hello Daniel, There was a time , i did buy jewellery at the pawn shop. I wear these pieces often. Oh! I did not know wedding rings were sold there. My weekend was okay. Your welcomer. blessings my friend. /Darlene/

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 11/30/2024 4:55:00 PM

Dear Darlene, it is interesting that pawn shops sell wedding rings so I suppose there is a market. I hope you had a great weekend and I am thankful for your note. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/25/2024 1:10:00 PM

Hello Daniel, I like the Monoku and image! It lets each of us have our own interpretation. Thank you. Pangie xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 10/27/2024 6:31:00 AM

Dear Pangie, How wonderful to see your comments this morning. I am so grateful for your visit. Leaving it up to interpretation makes it more interesting and thought-provoking. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Karen Croft

Date: 10/5/2024 6:16:00 PM

Interesting thought-wish I would of done this, but no I married him anyway!?!?

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 10/7/2024 8:23:00 AM

Dear Karen, your words speak volumes and I appreciate your sharing of your thoughts. Thank you!! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paige Hind

Date: 9/27/2024 4:52:00 PM

So sad, but it's beautiful though...

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/29/2024 7:39:00 AM

Dear Paige, I was very thankful to see your comments today. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daneil

Maria Williams

Date: 9/26/2024 6:30:00 AM

They say 'Less is More' and you've certainly said and depicted it in less words. Maria

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/29/2024 7:39:00 AM

Dear Maria, Thank you so much for your words of encouragement. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/25/2024 10:53:00 PM

Melancholy and deep, this monoku says much in few words. Brilliant writing! Best wishes.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/26/2024 5:42:00 AM

Dear Evelyn, I am always so thankful for your visits and comments. - Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Regina Elliott

Date: 9/25/2024 3:00:00 PM

A solemn monoku, Daniel. Reminds me of the sadness of gray divorces. Late September blessings to you and your family, dear poetry friend. ~

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/26/2024 5:41:00 AM

Dear Regina, yes you said it well that people 50 and older are splitting after decades of marriage. The problem with young people is that they do not see marriage as an option and would instead partner up for a period of time. We definitely need the Lord! Thank You for your visit! - Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/25/2024 1:21:00 PM

Interesting, my friend! Either a clever ad or a sad story!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/26/2024 6:07:00 PM

It is sad with no commitment. They miss out.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/26/2024 5:37:00 AM

Dear Kim, Thank you for your visit and comments. I wrote it as a sadness to the day when marriages are no longer a mainstay. Many people are just partnering up and forgoing marriage; therefore, the commitment is for the moment. We need the Lord! - Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/25/2024 11:06:00 AM

Marvelous, dear friend! This is an awesome monoku with such depth of emotion and expression. Brilliant! There is such pathos in your poem. A friend wrote a song about selling a wedding dress, only worn once. If this is for a contest, best wishes. It looks like a winner to me. Sending you blessings of autumn joy!

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/26/2024 5:35:00 AM

Dear Sam, I am so appreciative of your words. It is not for a contest but just sentiments born out of my limbic system. I recognize that marriages are falling to the wayside here in the USA and most people are just partnering up for a period of time. It is sad to see and maybe commitments are no longer a thing. Thanks again, Sam, for your amazing visits. - Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Gary Radice

Date: 9/25/2024 6:17:00 AM

As unique and succinct as it is brilliant. Cheers - Gary

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/25/2024 10:36:00 AM

Hello Gary, I very much appreciate your visit and your motivational words. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2024 8:17:00 PM

Sharp penning, Daniel! ~ Gershon

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/25/2024 2:45:00 AM

Hello Gershon, thank you and I know you have mastered the poems of few words but deep meaning. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2024 1:11:00 PM

Wow, unworn? I think maybe bought in haste? I love that part about memories, Daniel.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/25/2024 2:44:00 AM

Dear Andrea, I am always grateful seeing your comments and insights. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Lin Lane

Date: 9/24/2024 8:31:00 AM

I don't think I've read a Monoku from you before this one. You should write them more often. I've become addicted to writing them in rhyme, but seem to have lost my yen for it lately. Someone else's sad wedding ring memories, I'll not bid on. I've too many of my own.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/25/2024 2:43:00 AM

Dear Lin, thank you! I have written a number of Haikus and Monokus but have not posted them and they will slowly get up here on PS. I love the challenge to say a lot without saying a lot. It is sometimes as hard as writing the longer poems. I am always appreciative of your comments and poems. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/23/2024 10:57:00 PM

Opp haha.. somebody send me s'more poets like you!! was not expecting this.. pleasure reading this pleasant surprise

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/24/2024 5:22:00 AM

Hello Peonieslore, Thank you and I am very appreciative of your comments. I love giving myself a challenge to say something that is impactful in very few words. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/23/2024 9:24:00 PM

Lol. This made me smile. The price is so high that I wonder if the tradition of buying rings should be shelved.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/24/2024 5:20:00 AM

Dear Hilda, Thank you! Here in the USA marriages are diminishing greatly and even partners do not stay together long. I wanted to see if I could say that with an emotional appeal. Thanks Again! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2024 1:05:00 PM

Ahhh!!! So filled in emotion in such a few words. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/24/2024 5:18:00 AM

Dear Sara, It is always a pleasure to read your comments. You received what I was looking for in this monoku. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/23/2024 12:41:00 PM

this is very powerful !

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/24/2024 5:17:00 AM

Dear Rose, It is a challenge to use so few words but make it deep, meaningful and much up to the imagination of the reader. Thank you for your kind comment. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/23/2024 12:23:00 PM

a poignant piece of poetry, daniel...

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/24/2024 5:16:00 AM

Dear Ilene, It was wonderful seeing your comment today and I am thankful. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

John Read

Date: 9/23/2024 9:54:00 AM

I still have the memories brother Daniel.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/23/2024 11:53:00 AM

Hello John, Early in my life, I was almost engaged twice and it was quite traumatic for it not to have happened. Then along came my beautiful wife, who has blessed me and our family for 42+ years. Thanks for reading and someday I would like to know your story. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/23/2024 6:53:00 AM

Yep, indeed. Memories do get separated from source too often. Loving families keep them alive.

Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 9/23/2024 11:51:00 AM

Hello Joe, Thank you and yes, lets keep the loving families alive and going. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

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