Undressed- a Collaboration

She felt his presence by her side
Her first reaction – unimpressed.
She turned her head, a toss of hair,
The situation she assessed.

Maybe it was the dauntless smile
Perhaps the wicked twinkling eyes
The self-assurance in his poise...
Do warning bells ever suffice?

She sipped her drink and options weighed
He praised her looks and wispy gown
His flavoured words - delicacy
Her guard she weakly lowered down.  

Till late at night beneath the stars
They danced to music, hands on hips
If ever doubts had crossed her mind
Erased they were by burning lips. 

She found him suave and debonair
His face, ethereal, divine
Attentive eyes looked deep within
His lips still tasted of sweet wine.

The music played; he held her tight
Each sense alive and needing more
She whispered breathlessly to him,
"There's more to me you must explore."

Behind closed doors, he lay her down
And kissed each part that he undressed
Before her nakedness was shown
Her face he tenderly caressed.

"I will not take what is not mine; 
You will not be a one night stand."
"My love," she said with bated breath,
You'll guide my life; I'll guide your hand."

A Callman Collaboration (Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/10/2020 9:05:00 AM
Enjoyable to read again. Thanks for your visit. Hugs Rick.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/21/2018 8:14:00 AM
A blessed piece full of passion and love, Eileen, Paul and you have done a super collaboration! Masterful penning! Gordon
Login to Reply
Date: 10/23/2018 5:38:00 PM
Hi Eileen, a wonderful collaboration by you and Paul. Such a passionate sensual piece with such strong, clear imagery. The gentle words bring the reader into the heart of the passion. This piece was crafted by two true poets. This is excellent work. well done to the two of you. A fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Login to Reply
Date: 9/20/2018 7:16:00 PM
Hello Eiieen, this poem has a lot of passion. Have a nice evening my friend.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/13/2018 8:47:00 PM
Tender and passionate. An enjoyable read. Well done both of you. I’m glad I dropped by to taste this delicacy.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2018 3:09:00 PM
Awesome collab my beautiful friend...well done Paul & Eileen...love & collabs...^WW^
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2018 1:16:00 PM
A beautiful write so blessedly penned, a collaboration supremely done both Paul and Eileen. Great stuff!, have a great day, Gordon
Login to Reply
Date: 9/10/2018 2:45:00 PM
A surreal experience, reading this creative poem! I felt as though I was dancing with time, but did not quite know the dance steps! An intriguing write
Login to Reply
Date: 9/9/2018 1:33:00 AM
Wow, you and Paul work together so well, awesome synergy. Well done both! Viv x
Login to Reply
Date: 8/31/2018 8:29:00 PM
Your silky, sexy and seamless collaboration with Paul is sensually scrumptious, Eileen. A fantastic passionate romance that enthralled me from start to finish - especially awesome is that great last line! Luscious poetry! Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Date: 8/29/2018 1:04:00 PM
Thank you my willing and talented collaborator:) Always a pleasure to mix ink with yours. Hugs // paul
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2018 2:49:00 AM
The pleasure is all mine, dear.....as always. :) Hugs
Date: 8/29/2018 11:53:00 AM
A beautiful interlude...bravo you two
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2018 2:50:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. :) Much appreciated. Hope all is well with you and yours.
Date: 8/28/2018 6:33:00 PM
I always marvel at successful collaborations - this one is awesome.
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2018 2:51:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes. Paul and I are comfortable with each other's muses. :) I appreciate the visit.
Date: 8/28/2018 6:05:00 PM
I must say to you too! ~Wonderful sensual pleasing read <3 xomo!
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/31/2018 2:51:00 AM
Sensual pleasing is always a wonderful thing, dear. Thanks for the comment and visit. Hugs
Date: 8/28/2018 2:54:00 PM
Wow!!!! This beautiful collaboration took my breath away. The theme, the flow and the rhyming were all just about perfect. Bravo to both poets for the seamless, sensual work you have shared.
Login to Reply
Manassian Avatar
Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2018 2:56:00 PM
Thanks, Chris, for this high praise. I appreciate it. Paul and I have written over ten poems together. I'm hoping one day we could publish a book together....that would be a dream come true for me. :)
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter