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POTD May 12, 2025

To Fly

It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly.
Flight motion is a dreamy adventure I would savor. 
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.

I feel certain the atmosphere would gladly comply.
Granting me ascent would be a most splendid favor.
It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly.

Passing birds would wonder why and what was saying hi.
My desire to sky soar would never reduce or waver.
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.

To sky view earth's wondrous beauty might make me cry.
Dipping and lifting thru blue could make me a flight craver.
It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly.

My liftoff would be a spry leg jump and arm raising try.
I could be an artistic flying, smiling, cloud engraver.
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.

Amplified amazing waves of euphoria would apply.
Each moment of exhilaration would grow me braver.
It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly.
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.
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Date: 8/1/2025 11:06:00 AM
I sometimes dream of flying...and those dreams take many forms. I loved this poem CayCay, great stuff! Thank you for sharing! Ron
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Date: 5/26/2025 10:15:00 AM
I ought to be ashamed for missing your POTD. Still belated congrats.
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Date: 5/21/2025 12:55:00 PM
Belated congratulations Cay Cay! No wonder this is a POTD selection! Your magical ride through the sky is delightful!!
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Date: 5/19/2025 1:45:00 AM
Back with well-deserved congratulations
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Date: 5/18/2025 10:45:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on another wonderful win. Hooray!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "To Fly" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 5/17/2025 3:05:00 PM
Hey congrats , sweetie. Your entry soared above mine. It is wonderful.
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Date: 5/16/2025 6:30:00 PM
Sounds so fun! Peter Pan is a great verb.
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Date: 5/15/2025 1:04:00 AM
I love this poem and it is a fantastic villanelle, so well penned
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Date: 5/14/2025 7:32:00 PM
In dreams, anything is possible. With that being said, spread your wings and fly, smile sweetly as you embrace the sky. :) I love everything about this Cay. Floating through clouds is where I belong. I enjoy the view from up here. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/14/2025 2:39:00 PM
5... 4... 3... 2... 1... Lift-off! Congrats, Peter Pan, on flying. ~ Adrenaline Al
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Date: 5/14/2025 1:11:00 PM
I enjoy this breathtaking poem. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 5/14/2025 9:54:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, CayCay! :)
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Date: 5/14/2025 9:11:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "To Fly" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Date: 5/14/2025 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Cay Cay! "freedom thrill to fly" i love your unique experience and style of writing, "How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky" forever young as well, love it. I received soupmail, it takes some a lifetime to be true to their journey by figuring out what they believes, Yes! that is true and others we love the mystery of it all, and to keep it that way, my dear poetess, we write about our beliefs in even the smallness of Haikus and Senryu's, loves, tragedies etc. I'm not a dabbler of the cosmic arts but i do admire those who have the flair to do so. Thank you so much for your loving words i was thrilled! Enjoy your day! ~ Xhugs
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Date: 5/14/2025 8:00:00 AM
An exhilarating dream of flight, beautifully evoked! Congratulations on POTD, CayCay. :)
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Date: 5/14/2025 7:37:00 AM
Dearest CayCay, I felt like I truly soared and, yes, took my breath away. It’s such a beautiful expression of that exhilarating, dreamy desire for freedom we all feel. Oh, how you’ve captured that "Peter Pan the sky" feeling with such joy and wonder. It’s so perfectly you and so full of spirit and adventure. Congrats on POTD!! You must be flying. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/14/2025 5:55:00 AM
Flying would be cool indeed. Just gotta stay out of the flight path of those jumbo jets. Enjoy your day Cay
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Date: 5/14/2025 5:01:00 AM
CayCay, a fun and whimsical poem, so well penned. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 5/14/2025 3:01:00 AM
CayCay, you've written a Villanelle as if you were under a spell to fly. If I were Tinkerbelle, you'd be covered with Fairy dust and you'd fly as long as you seek new adventures. Congratulations to you for your POTD flight, Peter. ;-)
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Date: 5/14/2025 2:56:00 AM
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky… Passing birds would wonder why… an artistic flying, smiling, cloud engraver… Whimsical and charming…let’s fly!! hugs and congrats on POTD! A joy to read!
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Date: 5/14/2025 1:11:00 AM
Wow! You beautifully captured this form and the audience with your flight aspirations! Congratulations on potd CayCay and well done!
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Date: 5/14/2025 12:40:00 AM
- Back with a congrats on your p.o.t.d., CayCay...enjoy :) - I have a new humor poem for you :) - hugs
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Date: 5/13/2025 6:28:00 PM
Joyful poem! I am so glad I came across this wonderful and 'uplifting' poem! Very fun :)
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Date: 5/13/2025 4:49:00 PM
Hi Caycay, How is you and your son doing? I had to take a break from writing poetry do to my fight against throat cancer. I'm know ion remission and hope to resume reading others poetry. -Michael Craig
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Date: 5/13/2025 3:51:00 PM
Hope that went through. Dumb ass kept appearing.
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Date: 5/13/2025 8:18:00 PM
hahaha . i mistyped. i meant dumb ADS.
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