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POTD May 12, 2025

To Fly

It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly.
Flight motion is a dreamy adventure I would savor. 
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.

I feel certain the atmosphere would gladly comply.
Granting me ascent would be a most splendid favor.
It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly.

Passing birds would wonder why and what was saying hi.
My desire to sky soar would never reduce or waver.
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.

To sky view earth's wondrous beauty might make me cry.
Dipping and lifting thru blue could make me a flight craver.
It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly.

My liftoff would be a spry leg jump and arm raising try.
I could be an artistic flying, smiling, cloud engraver.
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.

Amplified amazing waves of euphoria would apply.
Each moment of exhilaration would grow me braver.
It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly.
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.
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VanHooser Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 11:06 AM
I sometimes dream of flying...and those dreams take many forms. I loved this poem CayCay, great stuff! Thank you for sharing! Ron
Buhagiar Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:15 AM
I ought to be ashamed for missing your POTD. Still belated congrats.
Gentile Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 12:55 PM
Belated congratulations Cay Cay! No wonder this is a POTD selection! Your magical ride through the sky is delightful!!
Miller Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 1:45 AM
Back with well-deserved congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 10:45 AM
Back with Congratulations on another wonderful win. Hooray!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful "To Fly" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.......
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 3:05 PM
Hey congrats , sweetie. Your entry soared above mine. It is wonderful.
Crandall Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 6:30 PM
Sounds so fun! Peter Pan is a great verb.
Miller Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 1:04 AM
I love this poem and it is a fantastic villanelle, so well penned
Nicole Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 7:32 PM
In dreams, anything is possible. With that being said, spread your wings and fly, smile sweetly as you embrace the sky. :) I love everything about this Cay. Floating through clouds is where I belong. I enjoy the view from up here. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 2:39 PM
5... 4... 3... 2... 1... Lift-off! Congrats, Peter Pan, on flying. ~ Adrenaline Al
Greenhough Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 1:11 PM
I enjoy this breathtaking poem. Congratulations on POTD.
Hind Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 9:54 AM
Congrats on POTD, CayCay! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 9:11 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "To Fly" write again. Have a blessed day with your win.......
Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Cay Cay! "freedom thrill to fly" i love your unique experience and style of writing, "How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky" forever young as well, love it. I received soupmail, it takes some a lifetime to be true to their journey by figuring out what they believes, Yes! that is true and others we love the mystery of it all, and to keep it that way, my dear poetess, we write about our beliefs in even the smallness of Haikus and Senryu's, loves, tragedies etc. I'm not a dabbler of the cosmic arts but i do admire those who have the flair to do so. Thank you so much for your loving words i was thrilled! Enjoy your day! ~ Xhugs
Buehler Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 8:00 AM
An exhilarating dream of flight, beautifully evoked! Congratulations on POTD, CayCay. :)
Rodgers Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 7:37 AM
Dearest CayCay, I felt like I truly soared and, yes, took my breath away. It’s such a beautiful expression of that exhilarating, dreamy desire for freedom we all feel. Oh, how you’ve captured that "Peter Pan the sky" feeling with such joy and wonder. It’s so perfectly you and so full of spirit and adventure. Congrats on POTD!! You must be flying. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 5:01 AM
CayCay, a fun and whimsical poem, so well penned. Congratulations on POTD.
Lane Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 3:01 AM
CayCay, you've written a Villanelle as if you were under a spell to fly. If I were Tinkerbelle, you'd be covered with Fairy dust and you'd fly as long as you seek new adventures. Congratulations to you for your POTD flight, Peter. ;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 2:56 AM
How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky… Passing birds would wonder why… an artistic flying, smiling, cloud engraver… Whimsical and charming…let’s fly!! hugs and congrats on POTD! A joy to read!
Jones Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 1:11 AM
Wow! You beautifully captured this form and the audience with your flight aspirations! Congratulations on potd CayCay and well done!
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 12:40 AM
- Back with a congrats on your p.o.t.d., CayCay...enjoy :) - I have a new humor poem for you :) - hugs
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 6:28 PM
Joyful poem! I am so glad I came across this wonderful and 'uplifting' poem! Very fun :)
Craig Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 4:49 PM
Hi Caycay, How is you and your son doing? I had to take a break from writing poetry do to my fight against throat cancer. I'm know ion remission and hope to resume reading others poetry. -Michael Craig
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 3:51 PM
Hope that went through. Dumb ass kept appearing.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:18 PM
hahaha . i mistyped. i meant dumb ADS.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 3:50 PM
Wow you are on a roll with creative poems. Villanelles are not so easy to do. Hope this scores high. A fave
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