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Edward Ibeh / Pick-A-Title - Volume 51 / written 5-12-25

It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly. Flight motion is a dreamy adventure I would savor. How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky. I feel certain the atmosphere would gladly comply. Granting me ascent would be a most splendid favor. It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly. Passing birds would wonder why and what was saying hi. My desire to sky soar would never reduce or waver. How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky. To sky view earth's wondrous beauty might make me cry. Dipping and lifting thru blue could make me a flight craver. It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly. My liftoff would be a spry leg jump and arm raising try. I could be an artistic flying, smiling, cloud engraver. How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky. Amplified amazing waves of euphoria would apply. Each moment of exhilaration would grow me braver. It would be a pure adrenaline freedom thrill to fly. How excited I would be to Peter Pan the sky.

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Date: 5/13/2025 6:28:00 PM
Joyful poem! I am so glad I came across this wonderful and 'uplifting' poem! Very fun :)
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Date: 5/13/2025 4:49:00 PM
Hi Caycay, How is you and your son doing? I had to take a break from writing poetry do to my fight against throat cancer. I'm know ion remission and hope to resume reading others poetry. -Michael Craig
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Date: 5/13/2025 3:51:00 PM
Hope that went through. Dumb ass kept appearing.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/13/2025 8:18:00 PM
hahaha . i mistyped. i meant dumb ADS.
Date: 5/13/2025 3:50:00 PM
Wow you are on a roll with creative poems. Villanelles are not so easy to do. Hope this scores high. A fave
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Date: 5/13/2025 2:44:00 PM
i love the phrase ' to peter pan the sky!'...say it all , the soaring mood of your pen, cay!
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Date: 5/12/2025 8:13:00 PM
A joyous and upbeat piece, I would love it, too :)
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Date: 5/12/2025 12:01:00 PM
- With elegant wingbeats fly together with the birds... everything feels so calm, but at the same time full of mystery... a wonderful poem, CayCay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/12/2025 11:05:00 AM
What a wonderful "To Fly" write. It would be fun/great to fly like Peter Pan in the sky. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day/week writing away............
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/12/2025 11:10:00 AM
It's amazing how often we do the same ones. I read yours and commented just yesterday, I think it was yesterday. Always enjoy your presence at my place, always sincerely kind and friendly. I appreciate you ... CayCay

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