THOSE WE LOVE Premiere Contest Winner

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Written: July 19, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose Those we love don't go away They walk beside us every day ************** Specters in the Wind they are still here, gathering in powerful gusts, heavy-hearted and somber, riding the crimson breath of night, as embers drifting through the air. They converse through the storm swell; their laughter loops in lilac breezes. While their sorrow seeps into the earth. Not gone, but concealed in mist, in the veins of tree bark, and the birthmarks of stone. They traverse the wheat that sways in the wind. Their footsteps forever frozen in time. Every echo is their letter. Every shadow represents a phrase, from the script of spirits who refuse to depart. Their touch resonates with the rumble of thunder. and their sigh becomes woven into the seams of daybreak. They don't sleep; they swirl. They don't flee; they flash. They don't perish; they delve deeper. Every time you speak their name aloud, you awaken to a tempest in the skies.
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Date: 7/25/2025 11:46:00 PM
Love the haunting vibe here—feels like the past is alive all around us in the wind and the trees. Super atmospheric and thought-provoking!
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Date: 7/25/2025 7:51:00 AM
Dear Lasaad, I am struck by the artistic, poignant and spiritual depth and breadth of your use of imagery and metaphors. Rich, poetic and gratifying for the imagination, heart and soul. Congratulations for your trophy win in Rose's contest with this stunning and shining piece! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/24/2025 11:53:00 PM
Ah, Sotto ~ this is a beautiful tribute to all loved ones who have passed. So tenderly written weaving strong with tender. The presence of Spirit through passed loved ones comes strikingly clear, giving confidence. Congrats & THANKYOU for sharing your gift of perception here. I particularly enjoyed- they don’t flee, they flash & speaking their name awakes a tempest ~ lovely ending, Sir. x.
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Date: 7/24/2025 11:40:00 AM
Sotto, This work is suffused with majesty. profound intellectual observations, and clever deployment in methodical manner so many poetic devices A rousing river of emotion and philosophical depth Congratulations of course Howard
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Date: 7/24/2025 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Sotto, congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. I do admire your unique way with words… Beryl
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Date: 7/24/2025 9:17:00 AM
Well deserved win! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/24/2025 6:10:00 AM
Wow.... So happy to see you flaunting the trophy. Hearty Congratulations dear friend.
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Date: 7/24/2025 5:31:00 AM
Well, lookie who got a Numero uno! Well done my friend
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Date: 7/24/2025 4:38:00 AM
+FAV. Each word is weighed in gold gifted poet. 'Every echo is their letter. Every shadow represents a phrase'... Congratulations. Cheers!!!
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Date: 7/24/2025 3:57:00 AM
A very well deserved win!! Congratulations.
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Date: 7/23/2025 8:59:00 PM
How beautifully and differently you have dealt with the topic! Those we love, though gone do not disappear altogether. They are in all the elements, in the air, in the wind, in the storm and even in the thunder. Their all pervading presence makes us stronger. " They don't flee; they flash. They don't perish; they delve deeper." They stay with us as an eternal presence. "Their footsteps forever frozen in time." Beautiful entry for the contest. All the Best dear Lasaad
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Date: 7/21/2025 4:32:00 PM
brilliant poetry, this is deeply touching and well written thanks poet
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Date: 7/21/2025 12:47:00 PM
SP, those we love are indeed always with us. You’ve expressed this thought with great artistry. There are so many things to remind us, and you’ve captured the essence and variety of them all. Pretty darn special. Smiles!
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Date: 7/19/2025 11:31:00 PM
Sotto, A work of towering elegance from your gifted pen. Sparkling imagery, exquisite word choice, and a majestic flow that never wavers in its rhythm or noble narrative
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Date: 7/19/2025 7:05:00 PM
Nice entry for the contest, Sotto. I enjoyed the imagery in this poem. Bill
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Date: 7/19/2025 4:44:00 PM
what an exquisite and powerful poem, Sotto! Every verse spoke deeply to me. I agree with your words...have had many personal experiences ... I especially liked: Their touch resonates with the rumble of thunder. and their sigh becomes woven into the seams of daybreak. wishing you a pleasant weekend!
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Date: 7/19/2025 3:17:00 PM
Deep, Sotto. I am a Christian but I believe something must be there, maybe God too can give second chances, one they learn. ? Anway :)
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Date: 7/19/2025 6:40:00 AM
Those that embrace Jesus find peace. It is the living that feels the tremors. Still, I enjoyed this write! You did well!
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