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.         "Journey rages within me, day and night.
           Vibrant sail modifies my course.
           Along the way there is great delight
           Together with jealously, sadness and remorse." The Poet
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    Navigating through life's highway comes from within
      Meandering through the road signs of my life
        I swerve to miss potholes all with trepidation 
Always leaving room if I need to change lanes
    Can't predict circumstances that may cause detours
      STOP GIVE WAY SLIPPERY WHEN WET signs I must heed
        My travels this far without crashes
I engaged cruise control this part of the trip
    With no map this journey was hard for a while
      Lost concentration hit a gravel patch
        Chugged to have my broken parts repaired
Follow directions on which my future depends 
    Now taking bypasses to sight the scenic view 
      Need more pit stops now the long journey has tired me
        Mindful of the rewards it's time to park my load
All the people I have met some have come and gone
    Was happy not to settle my spirit was free
      Memories in mind and heart always in top gear
        Journey end my destination is just ahead
It’s time for someone else to take the wheel

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Date: 8/19/2025 9:19:00 PM
Speaks, congratulations on your win in my J With Four Options contest. Your poem is beautiful and I love the quote and image, Constance
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