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Take Me Away

Take me away
I need to feel
to heal
Past pains
Passion cures
Your allure 
Makes it all go away

Please...Stay...

Take me away
Say my name
Pant it
Breathe it in
Exhale it
Hold on to me
Let this be
Our finest hour
Lose me in your power
Make everything fade
Everything but you...
And this
This never ending kiss
Bliss...
Pure bliss 

No heaven or hell
You've cast the spell
No yesteday or tomorrow
Now... now... now
Ahhhh....
Take me away

Let me heal
Let me feel
Let me reel from pleasure
My treasure
Take me away

Where there's only you and me
and eternity
In our lips

Baby, take me...

Take me

A~w~a~y~~~~~~

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Paige Hind Date: 8/1/2024 12:25:00 PM Ah, taken away....<3 you write with a lot of heart Login to Reply

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 7/12/2024 1:53:00 PM Beautifully depicted emotions! The glory of love and abandon! The most precious moments of life- for some lucky ones it is a lifetime! Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 7/8/2024 4:33:00 AM BE RIGHT BACK....gotta go take a cold shower....WOW.....Love clothed in the passion of healing.....Gotta FAVE this one and maybe whisper it to my wife tonight.... Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/8/2024 7:21:00 AM I'm sure she'll be delighted! ;) Honestly... that feeling like nothing else matters... what can compare. I think it's one of the few times we know what it means to abandon ourselves to love and be loved as we desire... thus tasting completeness. One of God's greatest gifts.

Paul Callus Date: 7/8/2024 2:24:00 AM Pure passion exudes from this romantic poem to which no man can remain passive, dear Eileen! When a woman offers herself and asks for more, who could deny her!! ~ Warm regards and hugs // paul Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/8/2024 7:23:00 AM Thanks for your lovely comment. I think the rest of a man's true manliness is whether he can make a woman want more and more of him. To be loved with abandon... who wouldn't love to experience that...

Ilene Bauer Date: 7/7/2024 1:23:00 PM eileen - you are the queen of romantic poetry on the soup and this poem is proof that you haven't lost your touch at all! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/7/2024 9:34:00 PM Thanks, dear. Kind of you. There's healing when you're with the one you love.

Eve Roper Date: 7/7/2024 1:15:00 PM I love the power of words , "make it go away", "No yesteday or tomorrow Now... now... now"... I miss those words, Baby, take me... Take me A~w~a~y.. Many blessings my friend Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/7/2024 9:34:00 PM What a sweet comment. Thanks, Eve. I'm glad it resonated with you. Big hugs