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Tania Kitchin's Summer Funny Limerick Contest...5 Jul 25

Sugary Summer

I had a vain neighbor called Jimsmooth
Opened on baywalk a fruit drink booth
Bragging, he downed sweet stuff
Till gummy gums got rough
Sugar binge left him without a tooth!

funnysummerlimerick

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/27/2025 5:07:00 PM

so cute! Perhaps Jimsmooth needs some vermooth! :-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2025 9:51:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write again. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win................

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/14/2025 9:50:00 AM

Oh no - really should watch that sugar intake. Congratulations Nette! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/13/2025 2:33:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your winning placement with your fun limerick.

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/13/2025 12:28:00 PM

Poor Jimsmooth! He needs a dentist! Congrats on your win! Xo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2025 9:55:00 AM

this is very cute. Is it for the summer limerick contest? I can't remember if it got filled up yet or not!

Paige Hind

Date: 7/6/2025 4:54:00 PM

LOL

Silent One

Date: 7/6/2025 9:17:00 AM

This one made me smile.. I like how yours is so different...

Len Gasun

Date: 7/6/2025 6:01:00 AM

ha ha..He got his prize. Awesome limerick my dear poet friend and sis. Got my smiling exercise after waking up on my late nap. So enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Best winning wishes! A blessed Sunday! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/5/2025 11:50:00 AM

What a fun Limerick write. Great last line. Thanks for the laugh. I needed it... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away..........

Hiya Sharma

Date: 7/5/2025 1:39:00 AM

Awwn haha that's so clever, the way you've written this amazing limerick! Hilarious and adorable at the same time! I love all the saccharine and summery atmosphere you've set up here, fills my heart with a sense of nostalgia... Wonderful wordplay here and it brought a smile to my face!! Quite funny and light-hearted, the tooth fairy might have stolen his sugar tooth, haha ~ best wishes for the contest!