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On a wave of splendour 
You came and held me 
in the clouds warmly silver 
They took lining rainbow's colour's
one's breath away escaped 

Raindrops sweeping ashes on remains 
touched sacrifice within my hands 
your held deeply 
Golden delicious heartbeats
In a string of pearls 
you grow with the rose's petal 
Angel's whom hold one's soul 
to the end forever grateful 
your with me always beautiful

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Date: 3/7/2024 6:35:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Liam, somewhat reminiscent of our Collab together. Good to see you posting here
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2024 2:50:00 PM
You need to come out of your shell and correspond more. It's the only way to get your awesome poetry noticed
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/20/2024 2:22:00 PM
I post tom and times I feel I have lost those whom I was close to, so in ways I judge myself and writings

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