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On a wave of splendour You came and held me in the clouds warmly silver They took lining rainbow's colour's one's breath away escaped Raindrops sweeping ashes on remains touched sacrifice within my hands your held deeply Golden delicious heartbeats In a string of pearls you grow with the rose's petal Angel's whom hold one's soul to the end forever grateful your with me always beautiful

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Date: 4/15/2024 6:37:00 AM
Hi Liam , this is such a heartfelt poem , beautifully penned with equally beautiful imagery, Danny
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Date: 3/7/2024 6:35:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Liam, somewhat reminiscent of our Collab together. Good to see you posting here
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2024 2:50:00 PM
You need to come out of your shell and correspond more. It's the only way to get your awesome poetry noticed
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/20/2024 2:22:00 PM
I post tom and times I feel I have lost those whom I was close to, so in ways I judge myself and writings

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