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Shaped Haiku 2
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Snails Pace
s. u. m. m. e. r.
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u. s. e. d.
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t. o.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
g. o.
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s. o.
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s. l. o. w.
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S s s sss N n n n nnnA a a aaaa I i i iiii L l l llll S s s ssss
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GggggggggOooooooooOoooooooooEeeeeeeeeeYyyyyyyyy
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p. a. c. e.
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age.began.the.race!!!!!!!!!!
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[summer used to go
so slow, a snails gooey pace
age began the race]
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