Snack Attack

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There once was a lad we all called him Mack To carry his snacks, he had a backpack While taking a snooze, His backpack he’d lose Somewhere, someone was enjoying his snack

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 8/4/2025 7:26:00 AM

Hello Bill, this is a beautifully catchy piece. Love the picture too. Have a wonderful new week ahead my poet friend.

Deb M

Date: 8/4/2025 12:30:00 AM

Bill….what a fun ,cute ,catchy little number…..unfortunately not fun for poor Mack! Debx

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/3/2025 9:29:00 PM

Baboon monkey often snatch snack :-)