signs of autumn

september darkness
a somber twilight evokes ~
a slumber immured

tree leaves dance and swirl
like floating gems in the sun ~
jewels of nature

swift flight of spring birds
in migration to safety~
an epoch journey
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Date: 2/24/2025 8:46:00 PM
An entire Autumn scene within three stanza; you have a way with haiku Tania. Hope you have been well.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/25/2025 3:31:00 AM
Flo, thank you.
Date: 9/30/2024 3:34:00 AM
Creative lines about Autumn. Way to go. It is a special season. Sara K
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Date: 9/24/2024 4:26:00 AM
You are so in touch with Nature. A beautiful way to be and your work reflects that, SuZ
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Date: 9/24/2024 3:19:00 PM
Suz, thank you.
Date: 9/24/2024 2:07:00 AM
Hi Tania your signs of Autumn says it all.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/24/2024 3:20:00 PM
John, thank you.
Date: 9/23/2024 8:11:00 AM
Very Nice. Sure to try your Contest. Have Good Days.
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Date: 9/24/2024 3:20:00 PM
Anisha, thank you.
Date: 9/22/2024 8:09:00 AM
Tania, your haiku poem is beautiful, Constance
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Date: 9/22/2024 2:28:00 PM
Constance, thank you.
Date: 9/21/2024 6:25:00 PM
nice triple haiku; nature based for the season upon us. I love fall; but hate the early twilight. Well-done, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/22/2024 5:40:00 AM
Reason, thank you.
Date: 9/20/2024 6:13:00 AM
Loved your "Autumn" Haikus, Dear Tania! They are brilliant!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/21/2024 4:25:00 AM
Mala, thank you.
Date: 9/20/2024 3:40:00 AM
It's with us now, you've captured it well Tania. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/21/2024 4:25:00 AM
Tom, thank you.
Date: 9/18/2024 6:21:00 AM
superb string of descriptive haiku Tania, i do love this time of year:-) hugs jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/18/2024 3:46:00 PM
Jan, thank you.
Date: 9/16/2024 5:25:00 AM
Nice depiction of autumn, best wishes
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Date: 9/18/2024 2:59:00 AM
Joseph, thank you.
Date: 9/15/2024 12:20:00 PM
Great haiku, Tania. I live in the deep South, where the leaves won't start turning for several weeks. Everything here's still green. Those birds, some of them, will be coming down here. :-) Janice
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Date: 9/15/2024 4:28:00 PM
Janice, thank you.
Date: 9/15/2024 8:17:00 AM
Awesome set of haiku, Tania, and thanks again for the fun limerick contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/15/2024 11:12:00 AM
Andrea, thank you.
Date: 9/13/2024 10:54:00 PM
a time of sadness for me, still I love the fall! Beautiful poem!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/14/2024 5:31:00 AM
Art, sorry to hear, thank you.
Date: 9/9/2024 6:06:00 AM
Dear Tania, I love Autumn, I Love Haikus, and I Love your blend of the two. Excellent! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/9/2024 1:39:00 PM
Daniel, thank you.
Date: 9/9/2024 12:54:00 AM
Great inspirational haikus. We had our first rain today after a sultry summer. But still hot and humid. Wish I had your Autumn as you described it so well. Hugs.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/9/2024 1:40:00 PM
Victor, thank you. -hugs
Date: 9/8/2024 8:50:00 AM
Yes, jewels of nature. love that... God bless you with love, Gina
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/8/2024 10:43:00 AM
Gina, thank you.
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