signs of autumn

september darkness
a somber twilight evokes ~
a slumber immured

tree leaves dance and swirl
like floating gems in the sun ~
jewels of nature

swift flight of spring birds
in migration to safety~
an epoch journey
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Thomas Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 8:46 PM
An entire Autumn scene within three stanza; you have a way with haiku Tania. Hope you have been well.
Kitchin Avatar
February 25, 2025 at 3:31 AM
Flo, thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 3:34 AM
Creative lines about Autumn. Way to go. It is a special season. Sara K
Delaney Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 4:26 AM
You are so in touch with Nature. A beautiful way to be and your work reflects that, SuZ
Kitchin Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 3:19 PM
Suz, thank you.
Read Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 2:07 AM
Hi Tania your signs of Autumn says it all.
Kitchin Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 3:20 PM
John, thank you.
Dutta Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Very Nice. Sure to try your Contest. Have Good Days.
Kitchin Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Anisha, thank you.
La France Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Tania, your haiku poem is beautiful, Constance
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 2:28 PM
Constance, thank you.
Poteet Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 6:25 PM
nice triple haiku; nature based for the season upon us. I love fall; but hate the early twilight. Well-done, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 5:40 AM
Reason, thank you.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Loved your "Autumn" Haikus, Dear Tania! They are brilliant!
Kitchin Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 4:25 AM
Mala, thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 3:40 AM
It's with us now, you've captured it well Tania. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 4:25 AM
Tom, thank you.
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 6:21 AM
superb string of descriptive haiku Tania, i do love this time of year:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 3:46 PM
Jan, thank you.
May Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 5:25 AM
Nice depiction of autumn, best wishes
Kitchin Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 2:59 AM
Joseph, thank you.
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September 15, 2024 at 12:20 PM
Great haiku, Tania. I live in the deep South, where the leaves won't start turning for several weeks. Everything here's still green. Those birds, some of them, will be coming down here. :-) Janice
Kitchin Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 4:28 PM
Janice, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 8:17 AM
Awesome set of haiku, Tania, and thanks again for the fun limerick contest.
Kitchin Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Andrea, thank you.
Vaso Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 10:54 PM
a time of sadness for me, still I love the fall! Beautiful poem!
Kitchin Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Art, sorry to hear, thank you.
Rodgers Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Dear Tania, I love Autumn, I Love Haikus, and I Love your blend of the two. Excellent! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 1:39 PM
Daniel, thank you.
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September 9, 2024 at 12:54 AM
Great inspirational haikus. We had our first rain today after a sultry summer. But still hot and humid. Wish I had your Autumn as you described it so well. Hugs.
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Victor, thank you. -hugs
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September 8, 2024 at 8:50 AM
Yes, jewels of nature. love that... God bless you with love, Gina
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Gina, thank you.
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