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Alliteration Nursery Rhyme Poerty Contest, Sponsored by Eve Roper.

Sean and Chuck

My feet are stuck in the muck, cried Chuck the duck.
Sean the swan came to his rescue across the lawn,
Chuck, grab my wing, and we’ll swing into the spring!
Chuck used his beak, as chic feathers tickled his cheek, 
They flew out of the muck, we’re now unstuck, Sean clucked.
Chuck felt happy, Sean felt scrappy as they fished for crappie.
Chuck felt struck with luck as he caught one, but it stuck,
Sean the swan, brave and brawn, caught the prawn.
Now a pack, enjoyed their snack, as they happily clacked!

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Terry Miller Date: 11/12/2024 1:33:00 AM Too funny, congratulations Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 11/12/2024 2:17:00 AM Terry, thank you.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 11/7/2024 9:13:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your very cute Nursery Rhyme write with a very cute duck picture. Have a fun day writing away............. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 11/7/2024 2:14:00 PM Paula, thank you.

Jim Healey Date: 11/7/2024 4:53:00 AM Nice one! Congrats on the win. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 11/7/2024 2:14:00 PM Jim, thank you.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/4/2024 2:47:00 AM Don't mind reading this again. It's so good. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 11/4/2024 3:08:00 AM Victor, thank you.

Jan Allison Date: 10/28/2024 2:32:00 PM Fab rhyme and great use of alliteration Tania and I love the cute pic too:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 10/28/2024 4:46:00 PM Jan, thank you.

John Read Date: 10/20/2024 5:17:00 AM A cute nursery rhyme and picture Tania wish you well in the contest. Xx Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 10/20/2024 5:49:00 AM John, thank you.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/19/2024 3:15:00 AM Oh, I loved this tongue-in-the-cheek poem. Totally cute and funny. Hugs. Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 10/19/2024 6:00:00 AM Victor, thank you. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/18/2024 10:51:00 PM A perfect nursery rhyme Tania, kids would love it, I did lol, I'm a big kid at heart. Tom Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 10/19/2024 6:01:00 AM Tom, thank you, it's the first one I ever wrote.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/18/2024 7:18:00 PM Great alliteration there, Kim. Thanks for your recent visit to my poetry Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 10/19/2024 6:01:00 AM Andrea, not sure if your comment was meant for me or Kim, thank you.

Lin Lane Date: 10/18/2024 3:56:00 PM Well, that seemed to work out for everyone. Good use of Alliteration and rhyme, Tania. Loved the duck picture, too! Login to Reply Tania Kitchin Date: 10/18/2024 4:45:00 PM Lin, thank you.