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Alliteration Nursery Rhyme Poerty Contest, Sponsored by Eve Roper.https://img.freepik.com/premium-photo/cartoon-duck-puddle-mud-generative-ai_1028873-4460.jpg

My feet are stuck in the muck, cried Chuck the duck. Sean the swan came to his rescue across the lawn, Chuck, grab my wing, and we’ll swing into the spring! Chuck used his beak, as chic feathers tickled his cheek, They flew out of the muck, we’re now unstuck, Sean clucked. Chuck felt happy, Sean felt scrappy as they fished for crappie. Chuck felt struck with luck as he caught one, but it stuck, Sean the swan, brave and brawn, caught the prawn. Now a pack, enjoyed their snack, as they happily clacked!

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Date: 11/12/2024 1:33:00 AM
Too funny, congratulations
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/12/2024 2:17:00 AM
Terry, thank you.
Date: 11/7/2024 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your very cute Nursery Rhyme write with a very cute duck picture. Have a fun day writing away.............
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/7/2024 2:14:00 PM
Paula, thank you.
Date: 11/7/2024 4:53:00 AM
Nice one! Congrats on the win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/7/2024 2:14:00 PM
Jim, thank you.
Date: 11/4/2024 2:47:00 AM
Don't mind reading this again. It's so good.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/4/2024 3:08:00 AM
Victor, thank you.
Date: 10/28/2024 2:32:00 PM
Fab rhyme and great use of alliteration Tania and I love the cute pic too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/28/2024 4:46:00 PM
Jan, thank you.
Date: 10/20/2024 5:17:00 AM
A cute nursery rhyme and picture Tania wish you well in the contest. Xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/20/2024 5:49:00 AM
John, thank you.
Date: 10/19/2024 3:15:00 AM
Oh, I loved this tongue-in-the-cheek poem. Totally cute and funny. Hugs.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/19/2024 6:00:00 AM
Victor, thank you. Hugs.
Date: 10/18/2024 10:51:00 PM
A perfect nursery rhyme Tania, kids would love it, I did lol, I'm a big kid at heart. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/19/2024 6:01:00 AM
Tom, thank you, it's the first one I ever wrote.
Date: 10/18/2024 7:18:00 PM
Great alliteration there, Kim. Thanks for your recent visit to my poetry
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/19/2024 6:01:00 AM
Andrea, not sure if your comment was meant for me or Kim, thank you.
Date: 10/18/2024 3:56:00 PM
Well, that seemed to work out for everyone. Good use of Alliteration and rhyme, Tania. Loved the duck picture, too!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 10/18/2024 4:45:00 PM
Lin, thank you.

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