Savage Garden

sergeant pepper smokes his stogie in a capsized submarine-
lucky lucy clad in yellow wears her purple diamond ring
rainbow demons play gin rummy on a sunlit july morn-
captain kirk on planet cestus wrestles with a lizard gorn
love me tender leaves them weeping/ uncle miltie turns them red-
joseph stalin keeps them hungry/ adolph hitler slays them dead
genocides and ethnic cleansings purify the holy land-
christians burning with their Bibles on the stake at pope's command 
gen'rals gather in their masses/ death and hatred to mankind-
just like witches at black masses poisoning each brainwashed mind

helter skelter shelter me
save me from catastrophe

turn the corner love your brother wish away all hateful dreams-
join us in this celebration all is not quite as it seems
take a moonwalk with your neighbor/ sail away on saffron seas-
meteoric skies are dawning let us get down on our knees
modern prophets sound the message babylon will see her end-
kill the godless beast she rides on yea, 'tis just around the bend
ziggy stardust sings soprano/ alfred neuman's lost in space-
jello pudding wooed bill cosby now it's just a big disgrace
wanting red but getting turquoise/ loving her but missing you-
children in the distance crying breaking achy hearts in two

shine on you crazy diamond
shine until the break of dawn  
           love
                      joy
                               be


*see how many cultural references you can find and recognize
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 8/11/2024 9:06:00 AM
Incredibly interesting and creative, Tom. I did "get" most of the references...I think.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/11/2024 3:23:00 PM
Thx Jimbo
Date: 7/24/2024 12:47:00 PM
Wow . . . a job so well done.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/24/2024 1:28:00 PM
Hey thx. I enjoyed mashing together the cultural references to produce a message
Date: 5/14/2024 8:19:00 PM
By the, love the pic!
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/24/2024 1:27:00 PM
Kewl
Date: 5/14/2024 8:18:00 PM
Do you have any books published. If so, I love to read them. Email me if so.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/15/2024 5:30:00 AM
Soupmail sent
Date: 5/13/2024 2:06:00 PM
This was a great read, Tom. Wonderfully written.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/13/2024 5:10:00 PM
Hey thx for stopping by
Date: 5/3/2024 6:38:00 AM
You spoke it! I wish i could’ve , but coUldn’t’ve mLuxurious writing for the proletariat. MIllenials need this in their sippy cups…Write on, Tom!
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/4/2024 6:13:00 AM
Writing on... Thx Sally
Date: 4/3/2024 7:47:00 AM
You are simply marvelous. Reading yours is a great experience
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/3/2024 12:31:00 PM
We try, we try. Thx Koyoto
Date: 3/26/2024 7:41:00 PM
An engrossing and fascinating poem, Tom! Wonderful writing!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/27/2024 5:05:00 AM
Thanks Evelyn
Date: 3/26/2024 8:59:00 AM
Wow! Fantastic write! so many references! Alfred Neuman, Mad Magazine (used to read it a lot back…way back in time)
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/26/2024 9:11:00 AM
Ha! Yeah good old Mad mag. Thx kim
Date: 3/24/2024 2:54:00 PM
Yes, you used a lot of terms I have heard in my lifetime. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/24/2024 2:57:00 PM
Coo
Date: 3/24/2024 6:31:00 AM
A smorgasbord of cultural references, Very nicely done
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/24/2024 7:07:00 AM
Yessir thx
Date: 3/23/2024 5:14:00 AM
Wow I love the book and I love the duo, but I wasn't expecting that ! An interesting read Tom. Well done. linking all those memorable classics.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/23/2024 5:40:00 AM
Just a fun write with a simple message. Love your brother
Date: 3/22/2024 4:31:00 PM
WOW, Tom. Very creative and entertaining poetry. I enjoyed all the historical references. Thanks for taking the time to included so much to remind us of our past. Have a great week! Bill
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/22/2024 5:43:00 PM
U2 and thx Mr Bill
Date: 3/21/2024 3:32:00 PM
You have so many great idea when you write, I really enjoyed this Tom :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/21/2024 6:13:00 PM
I guess I have an active mind. Or a warped one, not sure which. Thx Rose
Date: 3/21/2024 2:10:00 PM
Well Tom...I see the elephant.' Loading my 7 gauge sbs floop floop...You should have known I will take it forward here goes Jesus is alive!! Creation is the source of life first came Adam Took Eve for wife..Now you can marry a camel I see a king who did just that, Cam-mela I Think her name is, what is there, to justify That, enjoyed all the cultural stuff Tom ' just btw!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/21/2024 2:33:00 PM
Always appreciate your lively commentary Joe
Date: 3/21/2024 7:15:00 AM
Thanks for taking me down these tracks Tom ..from a time when there was spirit in the sky. Cheers - Gary
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/21/2024 7:41:00 AM
Ha! Norman Greenbaum. What a song. I should have included that one. Thx
Date: 3/21/2024 5:55:00 AM
I stood under every phrase, yes truly!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/21/2024 6:06:00 AM
Achtung! Thx
Date: 3/20/2024 2:12:00 PM
Keep shining, it's lovely to shine in crazy diamonds. A terrific rhyme it was. Lovely one Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2024 2:58:00 PM
Thanks my Nigerian poet pal
Date: 3/20/2024 12:31:00 PM
Savage garden . Wanting red but getting turquoise. Interesting .
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2024 12:41:00 PM
Hey aura. I wanted to write wanting red but getting blue but turquoise was more interesting I thought. Thx for stopping by
Date: 3/20/2024 9:15:00 AM
I already commented on your poem but I want to tell you that my comments section is open.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2024 9:40:00 AM
Great I'll stop by
Date: 3/19/2024 9:58:00 PM
Loved this jumble of cross-references to classic titles, history, and historical personages. Indeed a splendid mix of reality and fantasy! The very title and the accompanying image are also excellent. The alliteration generously employed adds to the beauty of the composition. The pinch of humor lessens the horror of the tragic events referred. Enjoyed reading dear Tom
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/20/2024 5:31:00 AM
Appreciate your review Valsa
Date: 3/19/2024 1:09:00 PM
well, I don't have time to count the cultural references but I sure noticed several of them very well. Great writing.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2024 1:18:00 PM
Hey thx for visit
Date: 3/19/2024 6:59:00 AM
Wow what a wonderful composite of images and witty content! I was engaged fully from beginning to end!
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2024 1:17:00 PM
Das is goot! Thx
Date: 3/19/2024 5:55:00 AM
Wow, what a storm of imagery you've conjured up. Ziggy Stardust sings soprano, now that I would like to hear, but I draw the line on taking a walk with the neighbour; he's a grump. So well written, you are a great storyteller Tommy...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/19/2024 6:01:00 AM
I thought they were awesome together but egos and such. Thx for visit lil buddy
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Maria Williams
Date: 3/19/2024 6:00:00 AM
It's sad that Savage Garden broke up. They were a great duo, but Daniel Jones didn't like the limelight, did he? Brissie Boys for you.
Date: 3/18/2024 1:32:00 PM
Wow. Yet another masterpiece.So clever and articulated. Loved the pic. Pete.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/18/2024 1:46:00 PM
Thx I wasn't finding anything I liked and this one slapped me upside the head
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