Room For Rent

For rent:
a room with three
rowdy, reckless roommates
who revel in raving it up.
Curtains they've ripped and carpets they've ruined
Worn sofa and rancid kitchen
all greatly reduced with
a garage too
for rent.

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Vanya Evangeline

Date: 8/11/2025 5:21:00 AM

this deal better comes with a hefty discount, lol. Congrats on the win!

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/9/2025 1:35:00 PM

Congratulations to you Andrea, On another stunning literary performance. Thanks for your remarks on my entry Howard

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 8/7/2025 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win dear poetess with a distinctive verse made to laugh up one`s sleeve. You have achieved both aims: top placement and make people smile. Wishing you a smiling day

Christine Watts

Date: 8/6/2025 4:05:00 PM

Ha Ha Andrea Well done and congrats with your winning piece it did make me laugh Cheers Christine

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/6/2025 1:11:00 PM

Well done, Andrea! Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2025 7:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/5/2025 8:29:00 PM

Sweetie: Best title it 'Room For Rent', I'm thinking so, "chosen theme is your poems title." I wrote mine when 34 were already submitted and by the time I finished someone had beat me to it. Love how you not only let R inspire you but used alliteration. A landlord who has given up! She also directs poets to center the poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/5/2025 9:19:00 PM

Thanks. I really goofed up

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/5/2025 7:33:00 PM

will this work? You are on my follow list, when I checked, Bozo who I had honestly and truly blocked, was there also. Anyhow, a great write by you! keep well, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/5/2025 9:18:00 PM

It is very weird but I am not allowed to open your poetry pages and comment to you. If I am not accidentally blocked by you, it must be a glitch. Can't open mail from you either. Hope you see this at least. Sorry