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Love one another as I have loved you springs to mind

divide and conquer is the works of the devil

creating a conflict of interests in a war against peace

unrhymed tercets to symbolise one of the twelve will fall

Make an opening for daylight to enter 
a subject planted behind the eyes 
reflections of the truth have deeper foundations 

All life matters regardless of how insignificant 
some may put labels on disturbing reality 
The spirit of wickedness born in human beings 

How every desire that their hearts conceived 
was always deeply rooted in nothing but evil 
devoured by hate driven by corrupted morals 

Twisted within those destroying this earth turning tides 
when the righteous and blameless stand accused of wrong doing 
something in the end is not right with humanity to begin with

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/11/2020 4:46:00 AM

true heart conceives the love significantly where the live live delightfully......excellent poem shared

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/10/2020 12:19:00 PM

Your words are profound and wise. God bless you dear friend, with many more amazing writes. Love to you, Gina

John Hamilton

Date: 6/10/2020 7:38:00 AM

Enjoyed this Liam, a lot of truth in the write, pray for God's kingdom to come, humans only hope at this point!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/10/2020 7:24:00 AM

So many brilliant lines in this poem--verses to live by: ..reflections of the truth have deeper foundations ..divide and conquer is the works of the devil..and many more. Words of wisdom, Liam--so well written!