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Rainbow Heartbeat

Rainbow Heartbeat 

Pour me a rainbow 
let it float on the sea
As it flows from your heart
and become a part of me

Yellow to brighten 
any cloudy day
As upon the waves
it effortlessly plays

Red born of desire
undulating motion 
Salty on my tongue
a passionate potion

Yes, pour me a rainbow
let it float on the sea
As it flows from your heart 
and becomes part of me

Blue as bright as the sky
a twin on the water
Twinkling refractions
Poseidon’s daughter

Green like in a garden
ripples tickle my feet
Liquid luxurious 
a horizon to greet

Orange to tantalise
on waters once pale
Jack O'Lantern splendour 
intertwining with whales

Let me savour your rainbow
as it floats on the sea
Flowing from your heart
becoming part of me

Indigo intuition
free flowing crystal clear
Your gift upon the sea
that draws me near

Violet imagination
A vision complete
Oceans of possibilities 
Your rainbow heartbeat.

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Howard Kerr Date: 1/18/2024 7:51:00 AM This is an excellent quatrain. I especially love its rhythm, colour, and original rhyming scheme. Howard Login to Reply

Aurore Severo Date: 10/23/2023 10:50:00 PM A very beautiful poem, I love rainbows, xoxo peace and love Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/24/2023 5:01:00 AM Thanks Aurore.

Paul Callus Date: 10/23/2023 9:12:00 AM You have a rainbow imagination, Richard....colourful and teeming with possibilities. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/23/2023 9:53:00 AM Thanks my friend.

Yolanda Nicholsen Date: 10/21/2023 3:30:00 AM lovely lovely write indeed.. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/22/2023 7:02:00 AM Much appreciated.

Valsa George Date: 10/19/2023 9:16:00 PM I have been admiring the rainbow you have created with its various shades. You have very scholarly described the seven colors and their significance. Beautifully written, dear friend Richard. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2023 10:44:00 PM Thanks for your kind words.

The Situation Date: 10/19/2023 7:25:00 PM Very creative with the colors and the rhymes. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2023 9:07:00 PM Thanks my friend.

Eve Roper Date: 10/19/2023 5:56:00 PM Great imagery of the rainbow in different areas it models its colors. Lovely write, my friend. God bless you. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2023 9:06:00 PM Blessings to you as well Eve. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Kelli White Date: 10/19/2023 5:15:00 PM I love this poem just beautiful, kelli Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2023 5:21:00 PM Thanks Kelli. Cool way to spell your name.:0)

Deb M Date: 10/19/2023 2:26:00 PM Richard l just love this poem ….beautiful colours and imagery! Its a happy poem to me! Debx Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2023 5:22:00 PM Thanks Deb, I felt happy writing it.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/19/2023 10:30:00 AM A beautiful write. I can see your pen was playing with pretty paints. Have a blessed day writing away.......... Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2023 2:15:00 PM Thanks Paula.

Ink Empress Date: 10/19/2023 8:49:00 AM This is so creative how you’ve written this, brilliant use of various colors of rainbow and what it depicts and the flow of this is amazing! I love especially your mention of poseidons daughter, and also red as desire and “ indigo intuition” clever word pairing and diction! Pleasure reading you always Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2023 2:16:00 PM You are kind. I appreciate your thoughtful visits.

Arastu Goyal Date: 10/19/2023 8:42:00 AM Really enjoyed reading this COLORFUL write! I loved the way you have stanzas for each colour of the rainbow. Nicely written, -AG Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/19/2023 2:16:00 PM Much appreciated.