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Rainbow Heartbeat

Rainbow Heartbeat Pour me a rainbow let it float on the sea As it flows from your heart and become a part of me Yellow to brighten any cloudy day As upon the waves it effortlessly plays Red born of desire undulating motion Salty on my tongue a passionate potion Yes, pour me a rainbow let it float on the sea As it flows from your heart and becomes part of me Blue as bright as the sky a twin on the water Twinkling refractions Poseidon’s daughter Green like in a garden ripples tickle my feet Liquid luxurious a horizon to greet Orange to tantalise on waters once pale Jack O'Lantern splendour intertwining with whales Let me savour your rainbow as it floats on the sea Flowing from your heart becoming part of me Indigo intuition free flowing crystal clear Your gift upon the sea that draws me near Violet imagination A vision complete Oceans of possibilities Your rainbow heartbeat. Image from Pinterest.

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Howard Kerr

Date: 1/18/2024 7:51:00 AM

This is an excellent quatrain. I especially love its rhythm, colour, and original rhyming scheme. Howard

Aurore Severo

Date: 10/23/2023 10:50:00 PM

A very beautiful poem, I love rainbows, xoxo peace and love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/24/2023 5:01:00 AM

Thanks Aurore.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2023 9:12:00 AM

You have a rainbow imagination, Richard....colourful and teeming with possibilities. ~ Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/23/2023 9:53:00 AM

Thanks my friend.

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 10/21/2023 3:30:00 AM

lovely lovely write indeed..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2023 7:02:00 AM

Much appreciated.

Valsa George

Date: 10/19/2023 9:16:00 PM

I have been admiring the rainbow you have created with its various shades. You have very scholarly described the seven colors and their significance. Beautifully written, dear friend Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 10:44:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words.

The Situation

Date: 10/19/2023 7:25:00 PM

Very creative with the colors and the rhymes.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 9:07:00 PM

Thanks my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/19/2023 5:56:00 PM

Great imagery of the rainbow in different areas it models its colors. Lovely write, my friend. God bless you.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 9:06:00 PM

Blessings to you as well Eve. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Kelli White

Date: 10/19/2023 5:15:00 PM

I love this poem just beautiful, kelli

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 5:21:00 PM

Thanks Kelli. Cool way to spell your name.:0)

Deb M

Date: 10/19/2023 2:26:00 PM

Richard l just love this poem ….beautiful colours and imagery! Its a happy poem to me! Debx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 5:22:00 PM

Thanks Deb, I felt happy writing it.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/19/2023 2:05:00 PM

magnificent, Richard!! I loved indigo intuition and violet imagination and oceans of possibilities. Such an uplifting almost magical Quatrain. I was left feeling such joy after reading your poem. Thanks for sharing it and have a great evening, Sara PS am faving this one :-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Sarah, I had fun writing this one. :0)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 10:30:00 AM

A beautiful write. I can see your pen was playing with pretty paints. Have a blessed day writing away..........

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Paula.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/19/2023 8:49:00 AM

This is so creative how you’ve written this, brilliant use of various colors of rainbow and what it depicts and the flow of this is amazing! I love especially your mention of poseidons daughter, and also red as desire and “ indigo intuition” clever word pairing and diction! Pleasure reading you always

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 2:16:00 PM

You are kind. I appreciate your thoughtful visits.

Arastu Goyal

Date: 10/19/2023 8:42:00 AM

Really enjoyed reading this COLORFUL write! I loved the way you have stanzas for each colour of the rainbow. Nicely written, -AG

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2023 2:16:00 PM

Much appreciated.