Open Door


A nice open door waits ahead
To a place in which I was led
I'm ready for freedom and peace
A settled place, stress can release

I'm ready for the views and space
to bring a smile back to my face
Quiet relief and inspired
to rest, from being so tired

Chaotic days are left behind
The open door, new things to find
When I'm there, I will celebrate 
My gifts, my life and destined fate

Heidi Sands

3/13/25

*8 Syllables 

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Date: 3/20/2025 1:30:00 AM
This is a lighthearted optimistic poem! Love it!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/20/2025 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Karen. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 3/18/2025 4:20:00 PM
Hello Heidi, you found your open door. Leave the unpleasantness behind. Hugs/ /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/19/2025 9:44:00 AM
Hello Heidi, I know you will. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/19/2025 6:11:00 AM
Yes Darlene. Thank you so much. I will. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 3/17/2025 3:22:00 AM
You left some disagreeable place behind. The new one is better. Keep safe.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/17/2025 4:03:00 AM
Exactly Victor! Thank you :)
Date: 3/14/2025 2:10:00 PM
A door to heaven, perhaps? Very nice! We can’t imagine such piece!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2025 7:05:00 PM
It is actually an open door that I finally feel after a chaotic year and closing on my house in peaceful , scenic area! Thank you Kim :)
Date: 3/14/2025 7:22:00 AM
- Leave your door open...let in some sunshine and joy, Heidi :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2025 7:04:00 PM
Ok Anne-Lise. I will. Thank you. Hugs :)
Date: 3/13/2025 8:40:00 PM
Lead me to that door, Heidi! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/14/2025 12:04:00 AM
Ok. I will guide you. You are welcome to it. Thank you :)
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