Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Open Door

A nice open door waits ahead
To a place in which I was led
I'm ready for freedom and peace
A settled place, stress can release

I'm ready for the views and space
to bring a smile back to my face
Quiet relief and inspired
to rest, from being so tired

Chaotic days are left behind
The open door, new things to find
When I'm there, I will celebrate 
My gifts, my life and destined fate

Heidi Sands

3/13/25

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Karen Jones March 20, 2025 at 1:30 AM This is a lighthearted optimistic poem! Love it! Heidi Sands March 20, 2025 at 4:35 AM Thank you Karen. I hope you have a nice day :)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 18, 2025 at 4:20 PM Hello Heidi, you found your open door. Leave the unpleasantness behind. Hugs/ /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu March 19, 2025 at 9:44 AM Hello Heidi, I know you will. Hugs. /Darlene/ Heidi Sands March 19, 2025 at 6:11 AM Yes Darlene. Thank you so much. I will. I hope you have a nice day :)

Victor Buhagiar March 17, 2025 at 3:22 AM You left some disagreeable place behind. The new one is better. Keep safe. Heidi Sands March 17, 2025 at 4:03 AM Exactly Victor! Thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2025 at 2:10 PM A door to heaven, perhaps? Very nice! We can’t imagine such piece! Heidi Sands March 14, 2025 at 7:05 PM It is actually an open door that I finally feel after a chaotic year and closing on my house in peaceful , scenic area! Thank you Kim :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2025 at 7:22 AM - Leave your door open...let in some sunshine and joy, Heidi :) - hugs Heidi Sands March 14, 2025 at 7:04 PM Ok Anne-Lise. I will. Thank you. Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf March 13, 2025 at 8:40 PM Lead me to that door, Heidi! :) gw Heidi Sands March 14, 2025 at 12:04 AM Ok. I will guide you. You are welcome to it. Thank you :)