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Newness Senryu

opening the door

to the joy of forgiveness -

a glow fills my heart

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A Newness Senryu Contest
Hosted by Beata Agustin
© 6th February 2022

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Jack Horne

Date: 3/4/2022 8:08:00 AM

yes, so much said here. I hope you are keeping well, my friend

Paul Callus
Date: 5/5/2022 9:04:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. Apart from a few hiccups, life has not been bad :) Best regards, my friend. // paul

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/24/2022 9:40:00 AM

Loved reading this Senryu Paul...and so true...once you decide to forgive, we feel peaceful and happy...God bless...~ Ani

Paul Callus
Date: 5/5/2022 9:21:00 AM

Forgiveness is the key to peace of mind, Anitha. Thank you for your lovely comments. Blessings // paul

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/22/2022 7:18:00 PM

May that door stay open for many. This is beautiful, tender and uplifting, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/21/2022 9:05:00 PM

Absolutely, ever so true I even turned the other cheek and opened the door at the funeral and spoke to these people at his funneral, though, sadly after my father in-law was cremated, and to this day 6 years later they have not required after his remains. My husband no longer speaks to them. I did try opening the door but they didn't want to know. Guess things happen in other families also. Hugs and blessings and warm regards my first and loyal friend on poetry soup.hope you are well, Paul

Len Gasun

Date: 2/20/2022 7:21:00 AM

Wow! Congratulations on your win my dear friend Paul! I love it. So beautifully inspiring. Thank you for sharing. Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2022 11:58:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments, dear Len. ~ Warm regards & blessings // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2022 9:28:00 PM

back with my congrats on this well deserved win

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2022 11:56:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I loved your winning entry! Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/18/2022 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love this write. Few words with much said. If only people would learn how to forgive. The world would be a much better place. Have a blessed day....................

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2022 11:55:00 AM

Thank you for your feedback, Paula. ~ Regards & Blessings // paul

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2022 7:51:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2022 11:53:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj. ~ Best regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2022 6:05:00 AM

What joy, forgiveness! Psalm 103…one of the benefits. Congratulations, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/18/2022 6:08:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Enjoy the weekend. // paul

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/18/2022 4:46:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your inspiring "Newness" senryu. God bless you.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/18/2022 6:06:00 AM

Thank you, Beata. Regards & Blessings // paul

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/17/2022 3:50:00 AM

Good Morning Paul - Hi. Thus the meaning of forgiveness to clear the heart mind body and soul. May this be achieved for one and all. Thank you for sharing. It was an honor turning to your page this morning.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, Lisa...it is an honour for me to receive your most welcome visit. ~ Warm regards // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/17/2022 12:44:00 AM

Oh the relief, love this Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 11:33:00 AM

Thank you, Harry. many are the benefits of forgiveness! Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/16/2022 3:33:00 PM

Hi Paul, You penned such an uplifting piece. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 11:32:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it, Alexis...thank you! Best regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 2/16/2022 3:19:00 PM

Alway a blessing to forgiveness. Good luck, Tom.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. Forgiveness is a winning card! Regards // paul

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/16/2022 7:53:00 AM

Joy of forgiveness is the best joy indeed, but at the same time difficult to attain. A great write!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/16/2022 12:24:00 PM

Forgiveness does not come easy, Swetha, but where there is a will.... Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/16/2022 3:01:00 AM

Paul, short with the meaning absolutely clear. Enjoyable thoughts...Delice

Paul Callus
Date: 2/16/2022 12:03:00 PM

Thank you for a second visit, Delice :) Best regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2022 11:08:00 PM

you did amazing with this one. Love it!!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/16/2022 12:02:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Your complimentary remarks are always appreciated. Regards // paul

Joseph May

Date: 2/15/2022 3:13:00 PM

Once that door is opened it gives you freedom, Very nicely done

Paul Callus
Date: 2/16/2022 11:56:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. Unfortunately it's not that easy when the door is rusty and in need of oiling! ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2022 2:51:00 PM

Yes, forgiveness can truly make a person feel much lighter. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 2/16/2022 11:49:00 AM

Thank you for reading and posting lovely feedback, Sara. Your page deserves another visit :) ~ Best regards // paul

Bill Baker

Date: 2/15/2022 7:41:00 AM

I like the poem, Paul. There is joy when a door is opened, especially the door to one's heart to God. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 9:58:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by with insightful comments, Bill. All the best // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/10/2022 1:46:00 PM

Lovely vision of forgiveness Paul…Delice

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2022 4:59:00 AM

Thank you, Delice. Happy Valentine's Day :) // paul

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/8/2022 3:46:00 PM

Love the meaning to the Senryn, Paul. To forgive certainly leaves a peace within. Blessings ~ Debra

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2022 10:40:00 AM

Thank you for the insightful feedback, Debra. Regards & Blessings // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2022 1:22:00 AM

Beata will love this inspiring senryu Paul. I forgive too easily sometimes. My granddaughter loves that about me. Lol. This will rate high. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 4:20:00 AM

I am like you, Connie....I am tolerant and forgive very quickly, though there are times when it's easier said than done! Thank you for the lovely comments. Regards & blessings // paul

Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/6/2022 9:08:00 PM

So simple isn’t it dear Paul ?! There is nothing like the joy of forgiveness …. Difficult for many however the gifts received from this act are immense. I love A glow fills my heart . Big hugs , Susan :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2022 1:26:00 PM

Thank you for the insightful feedback dear Susan. Glad that at last somebody reacted to my humble poem :) have a lovely week ahead. Regards & Hugs // paul

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