Newness Senryu

opening the door

to the joy of forgiveness -

a glow fills my heart

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A Newness Senryu Contest
Hosted by Beata Agustin
© 6th February 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Horne Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 8:08 AM
yes, so much said here. I hope you are keeping well, my friend
Callus Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 9:04 AM
Thank you, Jack. Apart from a few hiccups, life has not been bad :) Best regards, my friend. // paul
Jayasankar Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 9:40 AM
Loved reading this Senryu Paul...and so true...once you decide to forgive, we feel peaceful and happy...God bless...~ Ani
Callus Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Forgiveness is the key to peace of mind, Anitha. Thank you for your lovely comments. Blessings // paul
Nicole Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 7:18 PM
May that door stay open for many. This is beautiful, tender and uplifting, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress gently around my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
Proxenos Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 9:05 PM
Absolutely, ever so true I even turned the other cheek and opened the door at the funeral and spoke to these people at his funneral, though, sadly after my father in-law was cremated, and to this day 6 years later they have not required after his remains. My husband no longer speaks to them. I did try opening the door but they didn't want to know. Guess things happen in other families also. Hugs and blessings and warm regards my first and loyal friend on poetry soup.hope you are well, Paul
Gasun Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 7:21 AM
Wow! Congratulations on your win my dear friend Paul! I love it. So beautifully inspiring. Thank you for sharing. Hugs
Callus Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 11:58 AM
Thank you for the lovely comments, dear Len. ~ Warm regards & blessings // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 9:28 PM
back with my congrats on this well deserved win
Callus Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Andrea. I loved your winning entry! Regards // paul
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love this write. Few words with much said. If only people would learn how to forgive. The world would be a much better place. Have a blessed day....................
Callus Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Thank you for your feedback, Paula. ~ Regards & Blessings // paul
Alex Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 7:51 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Callus Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 11:53 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. ~ Best regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 6:05 AM
What joy, forgiveness! Psalm 103…one of the benefits. Congratulations, Paul!
Callus Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Kim. Enjoy the weekend. // paul
Agustin Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your inspiring "Newness" senryu. God bless you.
Callus Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, Beata. Regards & Blessings // paul
Ricci Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Good Morning Paul - Hi. Thus the meaning of forgiveness to clear the heart mind body and soul. May this be achieved for one and all. Thank you for sharing. It was an honor turning to your page this morning.
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 11:34 AM
Thank you, Lisa...it is an honour for me to receive your most welcome visit. ~ Warm regards // paul
Horsman Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 12:44 AM
Oh the relief, love this Paul.
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 11:33 AM
Thank you, Harry. many are the benefits of forgiveness! Regards // paul
Y. Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 3:33 PM
Hi Paul, You penned such an uplifting piece. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day-Alexis
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 11:32 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Alexis...thank you! Best regards // paul
Roper Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 3:19 PM
Alway a blessing to forgiveness. Good luck, Tom.
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Thank you, Eve. Forgiveness is a winning card! Regards // paul
Vangaveti Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Joy of forgiveness is the best joy indeed, but at the same time difficult to attain. A great write!
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Forgiveness does not come easy, Swetha, but where there is a will.... Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
Skelly Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 3:01 AM
Paul, short with the meaning absolutely clear. Enjoyable thoughts...Delice
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Thank you for a second visit, Delice :) Best regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 11:08 PM
you did amazing with this one. Love it!!
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 12:02 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Your complimentary remarks are always appreciated. Regards // paul
May Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 3:13 PM
Once that door is opened it gives you freedom, Very nicely done
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Thank you, Joseph. Unfortunately it's not that easy when the door is rusty and in need of oiling! ~ Regards // paul
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Yes, forgiveness can truly make a person feel much lighter. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
Callus Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 11:49 AM
Thank you for reading and posting lovely feedback, Sara. Your page deserves another visit :) ~ Best regards // paul
Baker Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 7:41 AM
I like the poem, Paul. There is joy when a door is opened, especially the door to one's heart to God. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Callus Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Thank you for stopping by with insightful comments, Bill. All the best // paul
Skelly Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Lovely vision of forgiveness Paul…Delice
Callus Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 4:59 AM
Thank you, Delice. Happy Valentine's Day :) // paul
Brown Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 3:46 PM
Love the meaning to the Senryn, Paul. To forgive certainly leaves a peace within. Blessings ~ Debra
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 10:40 AM
Thank you for the insightful feedback, Debra. Regards & Blessings // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 1:22 AM
Beata will love this inspiring senryu Paul. I forgive too easily sometimes. My granddaughter loves that about me. Lol. This will rate high. Blessings xxoo
Callus Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 4:20 AM
I am like you, Connie....I am tolerant and forgive very quickly, though there are times when it's easier said than done! Thank you for the lovely comments. Regards & blessings // paul
Lawrence Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 9:08 PM
So simple isn’t it dear Paul ?! There is nothing like the joy of forgiveness …. Difficult for many however the gifts received from this act are immense. I love A glow fills my heart . Big hugs , Susan :)
Callus Avatar
February 7, 2022 at 1:26 PM
Thank you for the insightful feedback dear Susan. Glad that at last somebody reacted to my humble poem :) have a lovely week ahead. Regards & Hugs // paul
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