Names

Every past that perfectly colors letters,
haunting losses beckon the predecessors,
utter names in passion or greeting, makes a
furious girlfriend.

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Written: 01.16.19

funnygirlfriendhumorouslosslovesapphic stanza

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2021 3:49:00 PM

ha. For me, it was opposite. My hubbie hated even seeing a picture of an old boyfriend of mine. I was so curious to see his one girlfriend but never did know much about her. Congrats on your win This was a most interesting one!

Rob Carmack
Date: 9/26/2021 5:22:00 PM

Thank you my friend.

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/22/2021 12:17:00 AM

Rob, thanks for the smile, with your cleverly engaging piece bringing it all, to its finale! Much enjoyed with my compliments, Aloha!

Rob Carmack
Date: 9/26/2021 5:21:00 PM

TY William for hosting and my placement.

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/1/2020 12:37:00 PM

Well yea! Lol hello Rob

Rob Carmack
Date: 12/5/2020 6:57:00 AM

Hey Flo, good to see you back as always.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/12/2019 3:29:00 PM

rob, i sometimes do well with sapphic, a few times, not... this one is way out of the ballpark!... congrats and thanks for coming around to compliment my entry in the HM contest... i don't give HMs in my challenges, they have no award point and seriously, i find this placement degrading; just saying.. miss your contests... my dachsund snickers is limping; i'll bring her to the vet... huggs to you and boo!

Rob Carmack
Date: 6/12/2019 7:10:00 PM

TY you Nette. I need to get to hosting, time is just hard to find now. My well wishes for Snickers. Boo is getting old, his fur is starting to turn white around the face and on the paws. Hugs back to you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2019 2:51:00 PM

Just here to say thanks for your comment on my little poem. I hope you will do Greg's latest contest. I bet you have a free verse with four lines that can stand on their own somewhere, don't you? Would love to see it.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 5/7/2019 8:00:00 AM

Yes, indeed, it gets harder every day to remember names and separate them into the right categories.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2019 5:25:00 PM

back again at this one, with the awesome last line! Also to tell you thanks for your comment on Carolyn's blog. Hope to see you in an email at least by the time next Wednesday rolls around!

Carole Duet

Date: 3/3/2019 5:25:00 PM

Well, that's an understatement! lol Great sapphic stanza, Rob.

Rob Carmack
Date: 3/5/2019 9:40:00 AM

David Mohn

Date: 2/14/2019 8:30:00 PM

Congratulations Rob...clever and nicely written!

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/15/2019 2:41:00 PM

Thanks David!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2019 7:17:00 AM

Well delivered form and witty content, Rob. Congratulations on a very merited win. Regards // paul

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/15/2019 2:41:00 PM

Thank You Paul.

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 2/13/2019 9:04:00 PM

This is really good! Congratulations!

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/13/2019 10:19:00 PM

Thank You Andrew.

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/13/2019 9:01:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/13/2019 10:19:00 PM

TY Beata and God Bless You too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 7:52:00 PM

ha! I did not see that jux coming. Congrats, my friend. Nice seeing you on a list!

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/13/2019 10:18:00 PM

Thanx Andrea.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/13/2019 12:23:00 PM

You have spoken truth! :D Congratulations!

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/13/2019 6:53:00 PM

Thank you.

Craig Cornish

Date: 2/13/2019 10:09:00 AM

Had me captured in the form and laughing and loving the ending.

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/13/2019 6:53:00 PM

TY Craig for hosting & my placement.

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/12/2019 7:21:00 AM

My friend, I could not even come close to writing such in this poetry form. I have never written poetry in this form and seems to be a very difficult form to compose verse in. Yet you did an amazing job of it..

Robert Lindley
Date: 2/13/2019 5:56:00 AM

Yes, this site has some great benefits and one of those is its many great members that display such amazing poetic talents. I find this poetry site has an over abundance of very gifted poets! So many, that its impossible to read them all even if one dedicates a hundred hours a week to make the attempt.

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/12/2019 9:09:00 PM

Thanks Robert. One of the things I like about this site, the contests introduces us to new forms. I have learned a lot here.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 2/9/2019 10:13:00 AM

Nicely done, with a very tough form, (and I wholly relate, lol) ... blessings and best wishes for the contest.

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/9/2019 1:21:00 PM

Thanks Gregory, and best wishes to you too.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/8/2019 8:28:00 AM

WITTY. All the best.

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/8/2019 9:06:00 PM

Thanks Anisha.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/3/2019 3:37:00 PM

You are more clever than I, you not only understood the contest, you apparently mastered the required approach. I'm impressed and very pleased for you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Rob Carmack
Date: 2/3/2019 4:09:00 PM

Before meeting my first wife, I dated 3 Kellys in a row. So for a few years, all I said was 'Kelly'. Took me a few weeks to drop the habit. Thanks for reading & commenting. You may want to give this contest a shot, there is still time. A Poetry Hug back to you.