My Dream Within A Dream

By Poet "Our memories fill yesterday. Today our dreams will fill tomorrow."

Will my dream be here tomorrow? A cool breeze does softy blow, over me as if I will know. Into deeper sleep I must go, what will my dream now show? I am still from head to toe, feeling like I am aglow. Another world I will go.
Within a dream what will I see? A huge yellow bumble bee, she was eating crackers and brie. From this dream I want to flee, please oh - please set me free. My bed is now wet - I did pee, let me out I will plea. Now awake one, two, three.
My dream within a dream, was it just too extreme? It made me pee then scream, what a very wild dream theme. The bee rode a leaf downstream, what a weird bee daydream. Through the trees I saw a sunbeam, the bright light looks like ice cream. Now waking up with self esteem.
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Date: 9/9/2025 4:30:00 PM
Good one! I would want to stay in the dream with the crackers and bree!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/11/2025 12:26:00 PM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be a, Good one. I guess this dream needed some tea to go with the crackers, brie and huge yellow bumble bee. Hahaha!!!! I love humor and I loved writing this fun write. Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away............
Date: 9/9/2025 1:25:00 PM
Paula, your poem is both entertaining and creative; you can never tell what the dream universe has in store. - Good luck in the contest!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/11/2025 12:22:00 PM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also Thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, both entertaining and creative. Yes, one never knows what the dream universe will bring to us.  Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Date: 9/9/2025 10:07:00 AM
A fun poem. Dreams can be sweet as well as disturbing sometimes.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2025 10:14:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, A fun poem.  Yes, one never knows what a dream will bring.  I love humor and I love to write in it. "Smile" they are free so give then away... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Date: 9/9/2025 2:10:00 AM
- You never know what the dream world will show... a fun and creative poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2025 11:46:00 AM
I posted my contribution today :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2025 10:11:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to be, a fun and creative poem. Yes, one never knows what a dream will bring. It was so much fun to write. Hugs... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Date: 9/8/2025 9:33:00 PM
Your poem does justice to the topic... ! It is equally hilarious. Your sense of humor shines in most of your poems. Sad, the dream made your bed sheet wet! All the Best dear Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2025 10:05:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme to, do justice to the topic... ! It is equally hilarious. I love humor and I love to write in it.  "Smile" they are free so give then away... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Date: 9/8/2025 9:07:00 PM
A night terror can make us cry out. It's always a good thing we have that mechanism that lets us wake up. It gave me chills Paula, great monorhymes! xX
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2025 10:01:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme write. It was a ton of fun to write. Yes, dreams sometime with a chill and sometimes just have fun. Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Date: 9/8/2025 5:50:00 PM
this is truly creative, Paula. I smiled when I read: My bed is now wet - I did pee, let me out I will plea. Now awake one, two, three. Best wishes with this contest entry. hugs & blessings, Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2025 9:57:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over. Great to see you. Also thanks for your, Best wishes with this contest entry. Glad you enjoyed my fun "My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme write. I am happy I could give you a smile. "Smile" They are free so give then away... Have a wonderful day with a daydream as you write away..........
Date: 9/8/2025 12:40:00 PM
"My Dream Within A Dream" - Rhyme ~~ Date Written:9/8/2025 ~~ Written By Human Poet.....
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