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July- 25- 2025
1398 Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Brian Strand
~ Placed Second~

 

they met, felt blest. stars smiled, friends cheered. time moved, life flowed. doubts crept, trust, slept. he yelled, peace stilled. she wept, distraught. hate grew, winds blew. both fought, for naught. bond shook, love broke. they went, love spent.

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Date: 7/31/2025 6:38:00 AM
Nicely footled!! Congrats on the win
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Date: 7/30/2025 2:21:00 PM
Creative winning work for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Congrats..Sara K
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Date: 7/28/2025 6:39:00 AM
Back with congrats!
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Date: 7/28/2025 12:21:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win with this wonderful footle, dear friend.
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Date: 7/26/2025 5:02:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I liked your Footles. A wonderful description with a tragic outcome. The topic of broken relationships remains prevalent. The poem you wrote has creative complexity.
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Date: 7/25/2025 9:41:00 PM
I enjoyed your Footles, Valsa. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my dear friend. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/25/2025 5:35:00 PM
A great descript with a sad ending.
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Date: 7/25/2025 5:58:00 AM
Love lost is always a popular subject. There is depth in your poem. Blessings.
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Date: 7/25/2025 2:43:00 AM
Creative ones. Way to go. It is amazing how couples can fall apart after a short period of time. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us. Reads like a good contender to me. Sara K
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Date: 7/25/2025 1:00:00 AM
enjoyed, as said the french poet Louis Aragon " il 'n'y a pas d'amour heureux" ( there is no happy love) thanks poet
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Date: 7/24/2025 11:05:00 PM
Very profound. Truth. Why do we do this to ourselves...injure the Spirit of Love? Love is sacred. Sacrilegious. Heartfelt read. Thank you, Valsa.
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