Love and its Fall- Footles

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July- 25- 2025

1398 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Brian Strand

they met, felt blest. stars smiled, friends cheered. time moved, life flowed. doubts crept, trust, slept. he yelled, peace stilled. she wept, distraught. hate grew, winds blew. both fought, for naught. bond shook, love broke. they went, love spent.

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 9:41:00 PM

I enjoyed your Footles, Valsa. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my dear friend. Hugs, Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/25/2025 5:35:00 PM

A great descript with a sad ending.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/25/2025 5:58:00 AM

Love lost is always a popular subject. There is depth in your poem. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2025 2:43:00 AM

Creative ones. Way to go. It is amazing how couples can fall apart after a short period of time. Thanks for sharing this contest entry with us. Reads like a good contender to me. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/25/2025 1:00:00 AM

enjoyed, as said the french poet Louis Aragon " il 'n'y a pas d'amour heureux" ( there is no happy love) thanks poet

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/24/2025 11:05:00 PM

Very profound. Truth. Why do we do this to ourselves...injure the Spirit of Love? Love is sacred. Sacrilegious. Heartfelt read. Thank you, Valsa.